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Patience
by Ronald W. Hull → (All Poetry by Ronald W. Hull)
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A continuation of a series of poems based on
women's names, namely Handful, Grateful,
Careful, and Amazing Grace, I started over
a decade ago.


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Patience

Her mother was patient at her birth,
nearly 10 months, for what it was worth.

She finally induced with some castor oil,
ceasarien section was not in her foil.

So they named her Patience for the time,
that her mother had endured without wine.

For she was devoted to the blood of Christ,
and without daily communion patience sufficed.

Patience was slow to walk and talk,
but her parents' patience did not balk.

She sat by and watched the other children play,
it took a long time, but she joined in the fray.

Patience tried the patience of her teachers, too,
so slow with writing and math made her blue.

But she patiently waited until school was over,
and spent the summers smelling the clover.

With no job in hand, she waited for a man,
to come from the blue and take her hand.

But the years passed, and Patience, at last,
realized that Prince Charming was in the past.

So she took to the Internet, hesitant yet,
to see if a man would woo her and her pet.

With the litter box to blame, no man came,
as Patience watched her parents, grow lame.

Eventually to die, leaving Patience to cry,
alone in her room, asking, "Why?"

She sat in that room, her patience too soon,
and patiently waited to die that very noon.

Med alert came, and a man with no blame,
saved her cat and patiently called her by name.

A shy bachelor at heart, he knew from the start,
that Patience was the one who lit his flame.

He asked for her hand, and it was so grand,
that Patience's patience was no longer strained.

Copyright 2013 © Ronald W. Hull

7/13/13

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 Reviews of "Patience"
Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on June 24, 2013
A clever story.

Reviewed by Mor Inchrory
Reviewed on June 21, 2013
Hi Ron,

Can’t wait ‘til you get to Gretel.

Best Regards,

Mor.

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on June 20, 2013
Patience seems like a nice woman. I kinda like her.

Peace,

Dayvid

Reviewed by Teresa Walker
Reviewed on June 20, 2013
Although patience is not one of my virtues, this one is a delight!
Well done Ron!

Enjoyed!
Teresa

Reviewed by Clarence Prince
Reviewed on June 20, 2013
A very nice one Ron, and in all things we need to have patience! Well done!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 20, 2013
This is delightful, flows well, and is "right up my alley." I needed this to take my mind elsewhere. Thank you, Ron. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on June 18, 2013
Ah! Another happy ending...giggle...loved this, Ronald! Thanks for making me laugh...nice rhythmic flow to your words...

Anna

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 18, 2013
Well Penned Ron
most enjoyable reading
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on June 17, 2013
Patience be the Virtue..
with a loving hand penned

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on June 17, 2013
Ah the sotry of patience.. very nice.. Myrna

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on June 17, 2013
I'm surprised that Patience fell for the first EMT vet that came along. That guy must have known how to really stroke a cat. Witty poem with many hidden meanings.

Reviewed on June 16, 2013
I Love Their Names!!! A lovely story poem too
...but now I can't say how we all should have a little patience
can I

In No Hurry
Unless I Run Out Of Patience
Vickie

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 16, 2013
Ron,
One of your very best poems...I love how you set the tone for this patient poem.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on June 16, 2013
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dark Knight
Reviewed on June 16, 2013
wow--very nice indeed

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2013
Ohh...this a sad one...nice story though

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 16, 2013
Hooray for the man who saved her and her cat!

Reviewed on June 16, 2013
Saved at the last minute! This nearly had me sitting on the edge of my seat.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed on June 15, 2013
A sad tale with a wonderful ending. I love a storie like that.

Ingeborg

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 15, 2013
Nicely put together, Ron.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 15, 2013
Love a happy ending.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 15, 2013
A perfect write of Patience, thankfully she found someone towards the end...e

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on June 15, 2013
Oft times, it is a stranger who comes into our hearts when sickness or tragedy strikes. Patience has no timeframe and too many look for love in all the wrong places. Good advice for those who think patience not a virtue, if you go 500 miles and haven't found what you are looking for, go an extra mile and have patience...there's a good human message here, and I'm glad I waited to read it and had the patience to absorb its wisdom herein, Ron. The rhy-mage is splendid! You made it magic.

Sage

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on June 15, 2013
Twisting, curvy road to a fully realized and rewarding end. Thank you for this.

Reviewed by Lark Pogue
Reviewed on June 15, 2013
I LOVE THIS! It is great and unusual.
L

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 15, 2013
Damn, Ron. What a sentimental piece of writing from you. Shock, I tell you. This was a wonderful look into the maid's birth and life until that miracle of all miracles, a man showed up, saved her cat and poured out his love for her and they all lived happily ever after. That is how it ends, and I'll have it no other way. Loved the picture . . . Enjoyed!!


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