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Myth
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Myth, the very thing that allowed us to overcome our animal instincts, is holding us back as we destroy our planet in its name rather than forging ahead together to the stars.

God giving Adam the finger by Michelangelo courtesy the History channel.


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Myth


Deep in the lost mists of time,
when humankind first became aware,
something was missing in the struggle,
the need to humanly share.

For there were lessons,
forged deep in the wood.
And those that survived them,
could pass on the good.

For the children were weak,
and alone could not survive,
without the knowledge of elders,
teachings of prosper and thrive.

Spirits arose from evil smells,
and strange unknowns to the sight,
some appeared in the day,
and some in the night.

Some were good with signs of plenty,
some were very bad with signs of death.
Interpreting these signs were weighty,
only sages could define their breadth.

Some appeared in dreams,
some appeared in stupor.
All of these signs were passed down,
as surely right and proper.

From generation to generation,
the stories were passed,
with metaphor and fable,
so young memories would be cast.

In the ideology of the family, tribe and nation,
everything in order, everyone with a station.
For there was evil lurking out there,
that would take away life, and didn't care.

The fear was primal, and never went away,
with good spirits for guidance, fear was held at bay.
In time, the stories, were carved in stone.
Still pondered by scholars to this very day.

Written into words for each generation to own.
Published in books, and edited to be proper,
to meet the king's standards, and not the pauper.

While our primal fears continue,
like the bogeyman under the bed.
The myth has been hammered,
through repetition and dread into head.

Until myth has become a lifestyle for some,
who let myth do all of their thinking.
The flock that is sacrificed so easily,
because they don't have an inkling.

So wars rage on over whose myth,
is right and whose myth is wrong.
Bolstered by tales of their exploits,
through revelations and song.

The myths of the ancients,
no longer hold true .
Science has debunked many,
that so many hang onto.

We are all one people on this earth,
and have to rely on knowledge,
and not spirits for our worth.

There are very real dangers to fear,
for we have created threats severe.
it's time we stop reveling in myth,
for the danger is present and clear.

Time to debunk all the fallacies,
that keep holding us back in our fear.
So that a brighter future for everyone,
will finally, after so much struggle,

Appear.

Copyright 2014 © Ronald W. Hull

6/27/14

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Reviewed by Chuck Swaim
Reviewed on August 1, 2014
Ron, many thanks for your kind words. wow, I'm blown away by this poem! I like your rhyme structure! The evolution of Man's discovery of reasoning is most interesting in this poem.

All The Best,

Chuck

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 7, 2014
My God's better than your God
My God's better than yours
My God's better cause he eats Kennel Ration
My God's better than yours

Loose interpretation, circa 1965.


Patrick

Reviewed by Roger Hull
Reviewed on July 5, 2014
I must have Mythed something. Seriously, man is programed to slaughter because we are meat eaters. It is unfortunate that in spite of technology and education, man continues to slaughter his own kind. Let us hope that John Lennon's "Imagine" comes true some day.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 3, 2014
Until myth has become a lifestyle for some,
who let myth do all of their thinking.
The flock that is sacrificed so easily,
because they don't have an inkling.

So true, Ron; and sadly so. I hope the idea at the end of your poem comes to pass... ...and soon, before it is too late. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 1, 2014
WOW, Ron, you certainly r long winded...I doubt there is anything more I could say that could top all that has been said thus far, other than the length, I found myself drawn in and willing to go much further...e

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on June 30, 2014
...erudite head on...on Myth...fanciful stories...cultural
"truth"...playing an important role in an individual life,
tribe and society...but then...the Science appeared along the
natural and human yearning for progress...industry revolution
took over...Myth...strong in humans beliefs...placing itself
between the camouflage of "truth" and "wrong doing"...plainly
alive today...not quite fantasy but a force...rarely truly
understood...when served on a silver plate of an objective
or/and reason...

Your Myth-buster-poem brings a degree of an enlightenment
and with it...oddly enough...reassurance...people are only
people...Your poetic words help to reflect on our own
bafflement...within our own emotions...when holding often
controversial and/or different opinions...we see "things" clearly...yet at the same time...are eager to render them...unbelievably oblivious...of the obvious...

Thank you Ron, for sharing your poem that provokes thoughts
far beyond the "its lovely" attitude...too often/easy/freely
adopted by humans...in todays life...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 30, 2014
Not sure perceived 'wisdom' or 'knowledge' is growing the brotherhood of man into a greater unity than collective faiths, myths or other forms of belief-systems have sought to do, Ron. They are both great forces for good or evil, depending on the agendas of the human hearts and minds that employ them. Ignorance and fear are the bogeymen, I agree... So well written and thought out, as always. xx

Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on June 30, 2014
I find it amazing that our planet Earth has been around for millions of years, yet human industry has caused more damage in the past 150 years,give or take 10 or 30, not sure on precise number. But when you think of the actual years, numbers, it's amazing.

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on June 30, 2014
...and the truth shall set us free.
Well written and thought out.

Reviewed on June 29, 2014
No doubt!!!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on June 29, 2014
There is much to reread and contemplate in this modest treatise on doing the right thing. Well thought through and penned. Kudos.

Reviewed by DM Yates (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2014
I loved it. Well-done, my friend.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 29, 2014
Flows well, Ron. You have developed (over the years) a well-articulated poetic style. My contention: Death will be the great (true or false) revealer of what we choose to believe, or discredit, in this stage of life.
Peace to you... rlc

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 29, 2014
noble wit on a conventional theme

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 29, 2014
So wars rage on over whose myth,
is right and whose myth is wrong.
Bolstered by tales of their exploits,
through revelations and song.

How so sadly true, especially with religious myths, which cause so much hatred and bloodshed.



Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on June 28, 2014
Excellent thoughts Ron.
A brighter future is very desirable.
The question is are we going the right direction?
We can only pray not to be led astray.
Like children being led by parents think they know best.
Do they really or should we behave like rebellious teenagers?

Hmmmm.


Reviewed by Lakshmi Sharma
Reviewed on June 28, 2014
Like the way the first part makes you think the poet is for myth but the last few lines show him in opposition to myth. Well done Ron.

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on June 28, 2014
Myths and traditions are a usually a part of a family or ethnic group's heritage. Perhaps people do not really believe or understand but consider it important to pass on the groups favorite "campfire stories." Unfortunately a good deal of misinformation continues to be circulated in this way. M.True

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 28, 2014
A long and meaningful poem.

Reviewed by D.T. de Bruijn
Reviewed on June 28, 2014
A very nice poem. Only unfortunate that also science brings good as well as evil. The atom bomb, chemical warfare, environmental issues etc. So even the proven truth cannot bring mankind to goodness. Oh well, we just go on, each in our own place. Thank you, Ron.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on June 28, 2014
It looks like God is holding out his index finger to Adam, as if to say "Hey, man, pull my finger!"

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 28, 2014
Eve shared that apple and look what that got us. Heh.Heh

Reviewed on June 28, 2014
RON ... Well said, and Oh so True!

Man's Inhumanity.to Man ... Continues & Thrives ...

Reviewed on June 28, 2014
Great poem, Ron! Thank you for a very thought-provoking and meaningful write!!

Sandie



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