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Under Water
by Ronald W. Hull → (All Poetry by Ronald W. Hull)
Saturday, May 9, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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While I have encountered a couple of these situations and was partially under water for a few years after an uncontested, inexpensive divorce, this is a collage of all the ills that can befall us if we're not careful. And, even if we are careful, bad things can happen. If you are fortunate to be above water, consider yourself lucky rather than superior. For, "There but for good fortune go you or I."

Lost Correspondent under water sculpture by Jason deClaires Taylor. Greneda, West Indies


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Under Water


It's been a long time now,
more like a slug, than an otter,
that I've been swimming,
deep under water.

Grew up poor, but didn't know it,
parents worked hard just to show it.

Allowance bought what I wanted,
all the latest stuff, just for me, me.
Never knew that spending planted,
a pattern of living that wasn't free.

In my teens I flipped for money,
spend it all for quick pleasure,
my milk and honey.

Learned how to dispose of stuff,
so I could easily buy more and more.
Still, never seemed to have enough.

Tired of walking, I needed wheels.
Quickly found all kinds of deals.
Bought a car I couldn't afford,
but when I drove, felt like a ganglord.

Got repossessed for lack of payment,
but the street drugs I bought,
eased my ailment.

College was required for guys like me.
With grants and loans, I got in easily.
Had to have the latest computers you see,
college was about status and not study.

She came along and saved my ass,
met her in my creative dance class.

Our big wedding cost a lot of dough,
we did not have.  Thank goodness,
her parents paid for it, though.

Had to have the American dream,
two and one half bathrooms and an,
ultra modern floor plan scheme.

The children came way too early,
what they cost was next to surly.

After many battles over money,
parted company with my perfect honey.

The children were hurt the most,
the lawyers were the Holy Ghost.
A bachelor again, I raised a toast,
and headed for life on the coast.

Mortgage payment went unpaid,
owed more than it was worth.
How things got this way,
I’ve no idea on earth.

So here I am without a job,
prospects dim like some slob.
Unemployment's run out,
and I'm on a limb, sawing it off,
like some kind of whim.

I'm telling you that I'm under water,
but what am I going to tell my daughter?

Copyright 2015 © Ronald W. Hull

5/7/15

 


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Reviewed by DM Yates (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2015
Loved it. A bit of humor doused with truth surrounded by reality.

Reviewed on May 25, 2015
Now this is a powerful depiction of a sad situation!

Reviewed by G. Roscoe (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2015
What a real dose, and taste of the living.

Reviewed by Alex Canton-Dutari
Reviewed on May 18, 2015
This poem -- situation -- brought to my mind a book titled "What to do when the bottom drops off." But it does not say anything that would help with the last question. Just have her read the poem; you said it all, Ron.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 16, 2015
VERY SAD.................. Liana Margiva

Reviewed by CHANTI LACE
Reviewed on May 16, 2015
So true and so sad..well done sweet Ron..Hugsss

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2015
We all relate and many of us have been "under
water," and even more still trying to get out...
A class should be mandatory about how to manage
your money when one is in high school. Well done
Ron!

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 12, 2015
This is a "tale" to which many will relate and it is a reality it seems these days more than ever. I was raised in poverty but my parents seemed to have taught me about money and, fortunately for me, I have never been in debt except for when I purchased homes (mortage). The last three vehicles that I bought were brand new but paid for in cash. I keep them for a lot of years before replacing them. Your poem makes me think and I know I owe thanks to my parents for a lot. Love and peace to you, Ron.

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 12, 2015
This is a heart-breaking reality for many of us, I'm sure, as we 'borrow from Peter to pay back Paul', all with the hope that tomorrow will bring us better things. Living within our means has become an outmoded concept for our generation and certainly in this country, those coming up behind us are having to tighten their belts in order to pay for our profligacy. Let's hope they learn from our hard lessons. So many sobering truths here, Ron. Your final couplet says it all. xx

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on May 12, 2015
Well, as the StarKist mascot, I can tell you that breathing under water becomes easier when you grow yourself a set of gills. It's all oxygen we fish and humans need alike, after all. Life turns upside down. It just does. The knowing doesn't make it much easier though, does it.

Great write, Ron. Stay away from the tuna! --Charlie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 12, 2015
So many Under Water today - a truly sad state of affairs.

Reviewed by Sonya Tomlinson
Reviewed on May 11, 2015
Cooool poem Ronald. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I took a peek at your book: "Hanging By a Thread". Will check it out more thoroughly in the future.

fuchsia sunsets & swinging hammocks
Love,
Sonya Ki

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 11, 2015
brilliantly dark comedy and truth intertwined within the continual balance of surrender. You are a master at penmanship and much more!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed on May 11, 2015
Ron ... nice synopsis of an "average" life.

Some years ago I posted a piece called "Choices".

It touched upon many of these issues.


Peace ...

Reviewed by Lakshmi Sharma
Reviewed on May 11, 2015
That is a beautiful poem and touches me deeply. Keep writing Ron

Reviewed by Michael Jones
Reviewed on May 10, 2015
Thank you Ron, we all have been under water at one time or another or will be! Pain & suffering, unfortunately it is a part of life and a learning process, design to teach us how to love and how precious we are and life is! But when one realizes that life isn't just things but we are spiritual beings as well as human beings and our ability to love one another as God intended. Then only can the perils of life be reversed to hope, joy, peace and love. Every nation has a name for God but a world without Him; a Holy, just, righteous and good God. It would be hell on earth and believe me brothers and sisters, we have not seen hell on earth yet! Peace!!!

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on May 10, 2015
..."whether 'Tis nobler in the mind to suffer the slings and arrows of autrageous fortune or to take arms against a sea of trouble..." comes to mind...when I read your great poem-tale with a compelling central figure that by making wrong choices suffers the consequences of "bad fortune"...and struggles...rather then...by taking action...applying common sense...reversing it...Nothing in this world is entirely perfect...there are too many human beings without a bottle of clean water..for a child...and ..."to be or not" survival question...
Thank you Ron for sharing your poem with real life issues.

Reviewed on May 9, 2015
I've got my flippers and goggles on!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 9, 2015
I'm drowning as I write this, gurgle, gurgle, my bubbles don't even reach the surface, I wish some shark would come along hungry and finish it for me...-e-

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on May 9, 2015
An epitaph to all those unwilling to face their own "underwater" chaos, and choose instead to wallow in delusional escape, convincing themselves that they ARE special, above it all, gifted with the "good life." Like it or not, we all have a case of Under water realities. Just too few accept them as lessons we've created for ourselves to learn from. Well penned.

Reviewed on May 9, 2015
Ron, you did a jam-up job. What some don't kno w is that those who are not under the water deep only have their head above part of the time.Most of us if not all are icegergs. I could very well relate. The perfect dream dies a slow death. Some of you get it the first time.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on May 9, 2015
Nice write on the "we've got to have it all" mentality. For some reason as I was reading this, the Waylon Jennings song, Luckenbach, Texas, kept going through my head.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 9, 2015
Touched home to me, Ron . . .

Reviewed by J. Quantaman
Reviewed on May 9, 2015
This poem has legs. It tells a good story without the sentimental ribbons and baubles.

Reviewed by R David Fulcher
Reviewed on May 9, 2015
Nice job capturing the grim realities of pursuing material wealth at the expense of everything else. Well done Ron!


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