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Golden
by Ronald W. Hull → (All Poetry by Ronald W. Hull)
Saturday, June 6, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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The glitter of gold is so enticing that we can’t help but seek it and try to hold on to its permanence. But there are things greater than gold in this world and we must learn also to seek them.

Sunrise on Little Lake Mendota © Tim Hull


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 Golden


From the golden glittering edge of breaking dawn,
to the golden glow left when the sun has gone,
I sometimes pause and linger in the realm of yawn,
where golden memories seem to go on and on.

The gilded ambition of youthful passion,
reaching upward towards castle's fashion.
With greed beckoning's and lurking's nigh,
cunningly directing path's bloody why?

Where the gilded lily seems more than the rose,
yet smells not as sweet, or so it goes.
Clawing and scratching with stilted prose,
success and fulfillment right in front of the nose.

Wildly digging for that golden nugget,
reaching for the low hanging fruit and pluck it.
The easiest way to reach the high pulpit,
shortcutting hard work in the rush to suck it.

What comes easily goes so as well,
we make our own heaven and our own hell.
Down to the pawnshop our gold to sell,
ashamed of our failure, no one we'll tell.

There is a silver lining to this golden tale,
a purpose why a porpoise is better than a whale.
Smaller is better when it comes to scale.
No one wins in a total wash sale.

So if you want to leave a legacy golden,
think small, not big with careful steps embolden,
write your legacy large and not beholden,
your riches in deeds and not in your foldin’.

Copyright 2015 © Ronald W. Hull

6/4/15

Dedicated to Mr. Ed (Ed Kostro) whose
deeds outshine the golden sun.

 


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 Reviews of "Golden"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on July 8, 2015
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 22, 2015
So if you want to leave a legacy golden,
think small, not big with careful steps embolden,
write your legacy large and not beholden,
your riches in deeds and not in your foldin’.

I always appreciate the philosophy that you share, Ron; and most of the time, I agree with your perspective. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Patricia Hilliard
Reviewed on June 10, 2015
Clever images and play with words. Yep, find the good in the small things, we usually have a lot more of those than of the grand accomplishments.

Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo
Reviewed on June 8, 2015
From the golden glittering edge of breaking dawn,
to the golden glow left when the sun has gone,
I sometimes pause and linger in the realm of yawn,
where golden memories seem to go on and on.............

So true. Thank you for this beautiful poem. God Bless you......Deborah

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on June 7, 2015
...intellectual/philosophical excellence and...practical thinking...of what it sounds like a Fibonacci Golden Ratio of a good person...somehow natural-human faculty...as long as we choose it...to be..."your riches in deeds and not in your foldin"....Thank you Ron for sharing your poem of such a wonderful and heartwarming thought...

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2015
Excellent poem as good better than Gold.

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 7, 2015
Thanks for the marvelous dedication and for the marvelous poem, my friend. May we all write our legacy in Good Deeds.

Reviewed by June Marshall
Reviewed on June 7, 2015
very nice tribute, you certainly have a way with words my friend.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on June 6, 2015
~Ron~
Your golden pen has touched the rays
on the lovely sunrise of the lake.
Very special is our Mr. Ed to recieve this dedication.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed on June 6, 2015
Fantastic writing!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 6, 2015
Excellent tribute to such a pain in the butt, but I think that diamonds are worth more than any gold, at least I hope so as I just stuck a new one in my ear...well, er, uh, a fake one anyway...-e-

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on June 6, 2015
Another masterpiece.Loved the 5th stanza. It certainly speaks volumes, as does the whole poem.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Safi Abdi
Reviewed on June 6, 2015
Enjoyed very much. Excellent poetry.


'Smaller is better when it comes to scale'

I like that.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 6, 2015
Great poetry

Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on June 6, 2015
Ron,

Pearls of wisdom! Love your comparison of the gilded lily and the rose to illustrate your points about aspirations for wealth which is better prioritized by deeds, those increments which add up to a golden legacy.

Reviewed on June 6, 2015
Masterful. Ron, you have such insight.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 6, 2015
Ahhh . . . Those last two lines certain hit home to me. I have never sought wealth . . . Sorta wish I had sought it at least a little . . . Legacy? . . . We all leave a legacy of sorts . . . Eh, mine will be dotted here and that by misdeeds . . . My poetry . . .Hopefully will be read and understood.

This was an excellent rhyming poem . . .

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on June 6, 2015
Very enjoyable read, pointing out many doubts for some, confirmation for others, ultimately giving all readers something to chew on relative to the way they're spending their time. And... although the "yawn" metaphor worked in context, on finishing the piece, there was no semblance of a yawn, only nodding in acceptance and support. Kudos.

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on June 6, 2015
You have some interesting rhymes here and a great selection of alternatives to greed - Something the world needs to look at more carefully.

Totally with you on the dedication too!
Rx


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