Together (poem) by Ronald W. Hull on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 20, 2016

Some times true love wins , no matter what the obstacles are !....M

Reviewed on February 12, 2016

Ron, heart felt message. Beautiful
Shervin

Reviewed on February 2, 2016

I truly love this write. I work with all children and there isn't one of them that is prejudice of any race or religion. Adults teach prejudice. I love children and only wish that all people could be as honest and loving as they are.

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on January 13, 2016

~Ron~
Opening up our hearts to them, is the only way to start.
Wonderfully penned.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 11, 2016

Ron,
Our place in this world is to open eyes to all possibilities as a writer. You my friend do this well!!!!
To peace, love and lightness of being,
Amber

Reviewed by Olusegun Lawal

Reviewed on January 10, 2016

A very nice poem

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 10, 2016

Black, red, yellow or white,
we are together in the fight.
There is no them or us.
only problems when we fuss.

I find your verses particularly meaningful at this time, Ron; they remind me of John Lennon's song, "Imagine." Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Michael Schafer

Reviewed on January 10, 2016

An excellent write.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 10, 2016

True this sound of John Lennon & MLK, but Michael Jackson I disagree with...the only humans he wanted together were children & together with him, no one else...-e-

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on January 9, 2016

Lovely poem Ron. Our church is like this. We have blacks, yellow, white and many from different backgrounds in unison giving praise to our Creator. It was not easy to find such a church. Most are pretty much segregated even today. I feel that is what is going to be like in heaven. Thank you Ron for this dream poem full of hope that will one day be a reality. Amen

Reviewed by John Herlihy

Reviewed on January 9, 2016

How true and yes, profound that "we all yearn for the same things," a line I wish I had written but you brat me to the punch. Yes, you cannot keep apart, those who truly want to be together. Nice work.

John

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on January 9, 2016

ABSOLUTELY! WELL DONE, MY FRIEND, FOR IT IS THE LOVE, DETERMINATION AND OPEN MINDEDNESS OF OUR YOUNG PEOPLE THAT SHOWS US THE WAY THAT GOD WOULD HAVE US TO LIVE. "...AND A CHILD SHALL LEAD THEM..." THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on January 9, 2016

WRITE ON!!!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Thomasena Martin-Johnson

Reviewed on January 9, 2016

You penned a powerful message. I wish the world and especially the war mongers could read it. I grew up in the fifties too and they spent a lot of time at a useless effort. It also caused a race into the unknown when we got a chance. Thank God my parents trusted themselves and me and I had sense enough to know that trust was of value.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on January 9, 2016

I very much understand where you are coming from Ron! Everyone passionately wants, and deserves love. I grew up in the fifties and society, as a whole, kept the sexes apart. But, like you said, Ron, "There is no power, on this green earth, that can keep them apart."

Reviewed by E Phillips

Reviewed on January 9, 2016

One of your best.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com

Reviewed on January 9, 2016

Unfortunately, the readers who will connect with this are void of the hate and vitriolic solipsism slowly but surely suffocating the species into a labyrinth of self-destruction. Fortunate are we who can read this and know there is no choice for the untainted. Nicely penned.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2016

Yes, greed is the key word, Ron. We all can do our part!
I like your beginning verses...

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Eva Pasco

Reviewed on January 9, 2016

A poem with a powerful message in need of heeding these days. All of us are in "it" together regardless of ethnicity or ideology.