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Vigil
by Ronald W. Hull → (All Poetry by Ronald W. Hull)
Saturday, November 23, 2019    Rated "G" by the Author.
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This poem is a far cry from the tight, very poignant and concise poem I dreamed about the night before. Strange how we can reach perfection in dreams that can't be carried out in reality. Also, a bit morbid for this season, but often it is during this holiday period that lost love ones are missed most.


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Old Man at Wife's Gravesite Courtesy of London Daily Mail



Vigil



Old man sits at his wife's gravesite.

Impervious to the weather, the night sounds,

and his own comfort, till dawn's first light.


His tears run freely as the October rain,

that runs down his face, cleansing,

his guilt and his long-standing shame.


As the sun rises and warms his body,

the determined old man falls asleep,

unable, his vigil, his body, to keep.


The caretaker discovers the old man,

and fearing for his life, calls 911.

Paramedics find him, squinting in the sun.


Paramedics inquire into his aims.

"I'm okay. I will not go." He proclaims.

"I'm on the vigil for my wife and two kids."


"I killed them while drunk driving,

a long time ago. It is time for me to,

join them… Time for me to go."


They checked out his vitals,

everything was okay.

The old man refused to leave.

Of course, got his own way.


For days the caretaker,

watched over him and,

brought water and food.


But the old man was stubborn,

and would not be moved.


A cold front came through,

and the caretaker had to leave.

But he worried all night,

of the old man's plight.


Arriving the next morning,

the old man was dead.

Hugging the gravestone,

as though resting his head.


On the gravestone an inscription,

that told the caretaker a lot,

"My Loving Wife and Two Children"

Interred on This Spot.


The old man's will stated it quite clear,

that he wanted to be buried,

next to his family he still held dear.


Copyright © 2019 Ronald W. Hull


11/21/19


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 Reviews of "Vigil"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on December 8, 2019
HOW TOUCHING. GOD, WHO SAW HIS HEART, HAD FORGIVEN HIM, WONDER IF HE ASKED? SADLY, HE NEVER FORGAVE HIMSELF. THANKS FOR SHARING, RONALD. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on November 29, 2019
So beautifully penned and deeply heart touching, Ron.

Reviewed by Michael M
Reviewed on November 28, 2019
A story in poetic form. Quite well done, I think

Reviewed by Jerri Blair
Reviewed on November 28, 2019
Beautiful capture of the emotional overload such grief and shame and loss would create.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on November 24, 2019
Very moving and touching. A sober reminder of consequences we never expect. And I might add, a timely write as we enter the holiday season of indulgence of spirits that flow freely. Don't drink and drive.

Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on November 24, 2019
You bring to sharp focus, the guilt of a drunk driver who must live with the consequences of his reckless actions.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on November 24, 2019
Dear Ron,

First of all, this is an excellent poem that should hit home for most of us. I cannot imagine what pain this man was going though. I seldom drink but during the holidays we all have to be extra careful because of the parties and good cheer. Then we must go back home and hopefully are not too tired or too drunk to drive. Drinking makes me sleepy so most of the time I refrain unless I am home or at a neighbors house. However, one time I recall waiting for a red light to change my reflexes were not responding too well because I was exhausted. When I got home all I could think about was how easy it would be to miss seeing a kid running across the street or a child on a bike. I shared this experience with friends and they all recollected similar close calls. Rich and famous folks have run over their family members after drinking in excess. Once again, all the money in the world could bring back a loved one. A sobering thought we all need to consider before we drive.

Well done, Ron! Well done!

John Michael

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 23, 2019
Very touching and very moving, a narrative poem that seems to go out of your traditional style. You are so right in your preamble, this time of year is when people miss loved ones most and can feel the import of your poem.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 23, 2019
The grieving process does eventually pass, though I thought not after my dad's passing in 1989 and here it is 30 years past and I cannot believe that it went by so fast...-e-

Reviewed on November 23, 2019
The guilt this man felt was real, and sometimes it may have haunted him for the rest of his life after he had caused the deaths of his own family. Drinking and driving is no fun if you had cause someone else to lose his/her life.

A timely reminder for this Thanksgiving weekend and the holiday season.

Sandie

Reviewed on November 23, 2019
Guilt is a slow killer for sure. Your words touched me deeply, Ron. Your words would make a great C&W ballad!! Indeed!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on November 23, 2019
I dislike the term "morbid." I'm not certain what it was you dreamed but I can't imagine it was any more perfect than this poem is. And you're right. The holidays, with all their warmth and memories, can be cold comfort for those who grieve.

Rebecca


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