A Rift Love Cannot Cross
Great Rift Valley East Africa
© Prof. Jianbin Peng, Chang’an University
Fatal Flaw
Love is our fatal flaw,
sticks in our craw,
whether benign or raw.
Fatal flaw, fatal flaw,
there oughta be a law,
against love like that, a law.
In innocence we love them all,
especially the fuzzy, furry ones.
Or when we heard our mother call,
fearless, we loved them all.
Fatal flaw, fatal flaw,
there oughta be a law,
against love like that, a law.
But then, we were betrayed,
love was not returned, or delayed.
We looked for answers, but found none,
our faith in love, over and done.
Fatal flaw, fatal flaw,
there oughta be a law,
against love like that, a law.
But hope springs eternal
we hoped for the wished for gift.
Often tried and failed again,
love's heart was fatally rift.
Fatal flaw, fatal flaw,
there oughta be a law,
against love like that, a law.
Copyright 2020 © Ronald W. Hull
5/28/20
You can read and print this poem at my website here.
budd
Sandie
Enjoyed the read. No doubt that unrequited love Sucks !
My 1st thought was of the Knights of Old... Championing a fair maiden from afar...
Chivalry !!!
Next thought was “The Courtship of Miles Standish” by Longfellow, wherein Priscilla
admonishes “Why don’t you speak for yourself John?”
Thirdly... Prufrock popped into my feeble brain ! Googled ( oops ! rather BINGed it ) -
“The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock” by Eliot.
OMG ! A vague, foggy memory from 1962 . The University of Maryland, in College Park ... 58 years ago, in English Lit 100. Not one iota of a thought about it for Lo, all these years !
But you Ron Provoked it somehow ! As an accomplished Professor, you might appreciate these ramblings from a mere layman ?
Many years ago, I pennned a short story titled “Love Is Like...” Wherein I think I made a reference to the old movie “Love Bug” - an old VW named “Herbie”. I have no clear memory now, of Why ?
Anyway, an editor of a magazine in India read it on AD, liked it, and asked permission to reprint over there, which I certainly granted, with great astonishment and pride ! My payment was simply a copy of the paperback in which it appeared. It sits somewhere on a dusty shelf in my humble trailer home.
Ron - while I must apologize for such a lengthy comment, you again, are responsible for awakening my very old Muse, by stirring up my old writing “juices” ! Ergo, it is Your Fault!
P. S. My dear Friend, I have always respected you for your knowledge, aplomb, integrity, and wit !
Do you remember another dear friend and mentor of mine from AD - Elizabeth Lucas-Taylor ? Just a day or so ago, I sent her a lengthy email reminiscing of our days of yore.
She responded in the same fashion, with may details. She has illnesses now that confine her to a wheelchair, is now 79, and still maintains a clear and witty mind !
Most people call her Bette, but I have always used Liz. Anyway, if you never read her book “Unfinished Business” I Highly Recommend it ! 😎
Sayonara for now 😻✌️😎
Rebecca
DENNIS . MONEYSAVER EDITING