Black pupils dilating
Green rays radiating
Streaks across
Deep blue skies
Such explains your eyes
The windows of your soul
Where no man has dared to go
And wherein a solar system lies
Strange and undiscovered
And many starry secrets
Remain to be uncovered
Within your eyes.
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Reviewed by Elizabeth Anon (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2006
Another great poem :-)
Another top fave, thank you.
Mysteries and wonders abound in "Total Eclipse"... and all the colors shine in the rainbow of Art. Beauty and knowledge meet, and the poem, "Total Eclipse" is a reality.
She was quite capable of taking care of herself...She appreciated everything he was doing for her and the Grandmothers Four, but she needed his help, not for him to take over.
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Another top fave, thank you.
Mysteries and wonders abound in "Total Eclipse"... and all the colors shine in the rainbow of Art. Beauty and knowledge meet, and the poem, "Total Eclipse" is a reality.
Thank You for sharing this jewel.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
It's not time to quit yet, maybe pull back and rest abit, but not quit. Your best is still ahead.
Salutations Poet!
Richard