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As Visitors Whom Think They Are Poets Are Just Blow Its...
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__2-10-03


As Ignorant As Sad As Bad You're Arrogant Attempt . Poetry Suck's...

Elmer Card a Visitor He Wrote His Name
He Must Think I Can Play(Dam)Little Game
But, Elmer Card Rhymes With Elmer Dudd_

Now He Tried To Use Bam As I Say
He Must Think I,(Am)He's Poet,I Can Play,
Elmer Card Rhymes With Elmer Fudd_

He Tried To Use Spam As I Say
He Must Think I,(It's Jam), Dismay
Elmer Card Rhymes With Elmer Cardboard_

He Tried So Hard,SlamTo Be a Poet,I Say
He Think's He's So Bright(Cram), Betray,
Elmer Card Rhymes With Elmer Crass_

Hey, Elmer Card I Could Care Less, Fray,
What Your Problem Is,(Dam)Fact Let's Play
ElmerCard,Bam,Spam,Slam This Up Your Ass!

Retribution, TRASK c 2003 TRASK


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 Reviews of "As Visitors Whom Think They Are Poets Are Just Blow Its..."
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on February 11, 2003
Great response! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 11, 2003
Only TRASK may do that ass kicking...you have my vote.....GO FOR IT>>
Spam,Slam This Up That Ass..
Love
tinka

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on February 11, 2003
Try not to let things get
to you...
Several of us has had a
rude comments...
I feel that they must
have a poor self esteem,
To slam others makes them
feel powerful...

I only laugh it off...

Trixie

Reviewed on February 11, 2003
I will tell you what I do. I write to please myself for you cannot please everyone. They don't have to read your words if they don't like them.

God bless,
Tim

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on February 11, 2003
My dear friend, I get alot
of the same in my writes.
Too bad they feel the need
to hide behind a false name.
This is a much needed message,
my friend.
Hugggs

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
Geeeezzzzz
he thought you were a wittle gway wabbit!

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
ditto ~E
josie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
Dear Trask,

I have been following you for perhaps as long as I have been at AD, and I have read your work with pleasure, not always agreeing with you [who said I had to?] and reading the various comments to your work, including the jabs you take at yourself.

What many people may not realize is that you are 'a political cartoonist', but instead of using charicatures, you paint with words in poetry form. That takes a tremendous amount of talent, dear heart. And talent you have.

People such as you and your talent are needed in this world. You have the ability to jerk people around from their too comfortable views and parrot-like dogma, and you make them think of other things, not always pleasant, to be sure.

As a reader, and one who appreciates thinking people [I like mavericks; I am one myself], for that I thank you.

Appreciate yourself to the fullest...others do...

Kindest regards,
~Elizabeth

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
wow! You tell 'em!!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
like how you kick some poetic butt ;)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
Trask,
You are a rebel
Peg

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
You hadme rolling with laughter at your slamming of this elmer card hee hee only you Trask would be so up front and honest only you and that is why youre so cool great job on this one

Reviewed on February 10, 2003
Love your message and your poem! Nice write TRASK!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
lol....kick a$$ TRASK------

Reviewed on February 10, 2003
the trolls are out again, i see...i've had a few...ignore them, TRASK, i love your writing! you write in a way that compels people to read between the lines to grasp the message within a message...two messages in one write! excellent! ((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed on February 10, 2003
hmmm....interesting write, dear trask! but a great one, nevertheless! HA! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)


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