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An old fort..........
by Karen Palumbo → (All Poetry by Karen Palumbo)
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The photograph is of Fort Parker located in Mexia, Texas......


Poem Artwork

 

                                An old fort........

 




 

 

 


     Woke up very early, before the sunrise,
    today is the day we are going for a ride.
  Traveling further south to visit an old fort,
  wide brimmed hat, sunglasses and camera
                            at my side.
 

    Along the way taking in all the scenery,
    a chance to take pictures and see many
                          small towns,
  Farms filled with horses, cattle and goats,
     a way of life shrinking, barns in grays
                           and browns.
 

      Sometimes I wish the clock could be
                          turned back,
         to a period of time when life was
                         much slower.
 When people you passed were recognizable,
       stopped to say hello with a pace that
                          was lower.
 

  As we drive along a path well used before,
shade trees all around and pastures are green.
    Open the windows let the cool refreshing
                                 air in,
  the ride is relaxing and the view so serene.
 

      Over the hill and off in the distance,
  an old wooden fort can be seen with ease.
   Excited and anxious to walk the grounds,
  a way of life disappeared, yet still wants
                            to please.


Dwellers of the time lived in such tiny rooms,
       stacked beds, small tables and toys
                          on the floor.
 Handmade cradle stood alone in one corner,
    while pots, rifles and trinkets hung by
                            the door.
 

Outside a pen stood where horses were kept,
        amazing how people lived, rugged 
                         and resolute.
Overcoming any obstacle placed in their path,
      never concerned about being destitute.

 

Written by:
Karen Palumbo
Photography by:
Robert Palumbo
8/10/2007
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 Reviews of "An old fort.........."
Reviewed on October 15, 2008
Hello Karen,

You put so much imagery into your poems - takes us there, we are there . . . on a magic carpet ride. Thanks!


Best wishes,

Lance

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
History, reveals that which we viewed with mystery in a perspective of new found relevance. As we step into the worlds of our ancestors there is an excitement and appreciation for them and their time. Remnants such as this old fort create a special feel for me. Most of the old forts were at one time the western most frontiers of our great nation. Frontiers of physical position as well as frontiers of the minds. Fascination looms within. Your poem as with all of your works paints such a crystal clear image and physical presence that I am there. Thank you for letting me be there with you to savor. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Jo-Etta Gravett
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
This place....was, and is History. I loved this, your words paint a picture...of your travels to this place..that place in time. I could see the small towns, the green pastures, and then the fort, standing guard, yet letting the familiars pass. Thank you, for you kind comments about my poem. That helps me sooo much. If you have any suggestion or critiques, when I finally post the text of my book, please, by all means jump in! Have a wonderful day!!!!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
Your words took me there. I always like to imagine what people's lives were like back then...........m

Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons
Reviewed on August 15, 2007
A lovely tribute to the simpler and sometimes harsh life of the past.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on August 13, 2007
Beautiful images from hubbys foto & your write. I often wish I could go back to those simple life days even through the hardships doing without our toys nowadays. Superb work.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on August 12, 2007
Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 12, 2007
Thank you both karen and Robert, for sharing your beautiful work with us, giving me the opportunity to go places I've never been!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
We didn't have an air condition until I was 17.
Thanks for the journey.
I can hear my kids now, I didn't get a cell phone
until I left home. I'll do without food, but I gotta have my cell.
Stay safe...

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
last year we visited a Old Fort near Kearney Nebraska....You described it so much alike.... Thank you for this poem and a chance to slow down and enjoy your poetic Fort!!

Peace,
Josie

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Thank you for this beautiful walk
I know I was there with you
Because it felt that way as
My eyes dance through the page
But in my part of TX you open the window
And you don't have cool refreshing air just Hot!!
Excellent Job the poem and picture are trully stunning!
Love Peace and Hugsss to both...Yolie

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Those were the days when people cared for each other, minded thier own business but helped those less fortunate. none were wealthy. But if one family had enough in the pot for one more bowl, they considered themselves fortunate. Boy, how times have changed. Loved the piece Karen, interesting as always.

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Beautiful write. This reminds me so much of the "olden days" at Colonial Williamsburg. Life was hard, but there weren't that many distractions to stand in the way of getting a day's work done and enjoying a quiet evening after dinner.

George

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Beautiful write and photograph my friend, I too sometimes wish we could turn back time to what many consider to be a more rugged and harsh time, but one that I consider a more pleasurable, and peaceful time...I would miss the Internet, but we could always have writers groups, where we could socialize face to face...things were more personal, and the smaller things were appreciated...great write, wonderful imagery and a beautiful combination! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Leo Durrant
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
"Open the windows let the cool refreshing air in"
Are you sure it's in Texas? I keep the windows rolled up to keep the cool refreshing air in.
Good write. The meter ambles along like the drive you describe. Very fitting.
Leo

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Incredible how we used to live a slower life, required so little and lived in tiny rooms. Today we have much more and we seem less happy. Great poem. Victor

Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Felt like I was right there with you and Robert, Karan. Superb writing; enjoyed!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Wonderful...visions of a life we still wish we could cling to.

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
I wish life were that simple now.
The cost of living wouldn't be so expensive.
My dad said when he was a kid he could buy a bag
of cookies for just a penny. Now cookies cost 3 to 4
dollars.

Enjoyed reading...Pat

Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Karen, and Robert,

An excellent outing with a history lesson, besides: well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Great writing,enjoyed...Hugssssss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Sometimes I wish the clock could be
turned back,
to a period of time when life was
much slower.

So do I, just about every day now. And History is a fascinating topic.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
I too wish we could turn back time and it would be 100 years in the past maybe more, twas a much simpler life, I enjoyed this one Karen, love Holly

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Nicely descriptive and captivating. You take the reader along with you on the expedition. Good job.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
A simple life, with an abundant faith in living. Enjoyed

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Great look back at our history and I wonder how many of us, knowing what we know today, could have lived such a rugged life as our ancestors did.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on August 11, 2007
Yes indeed & before that time rugged took on another meaning - It's fascinating-{wonderful} <>Love * Ted


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