A dance of beauty enacted in form a mirage that comes upon a storm a purple fusion ribbon wrapped around a cloud cosmically trapped the neon light of tempestuous torrents creating havoc over many continents secretions of nuclear clouds that reign covering fools that follow the insane leaders who bequeath danse macabre rejoice over pas de deux of murder vultures compete in the masquarade flouting dance an emigration escapade voracious winds inventing their own dance joining in the flow ventillating violence now appears the devilish dance of diversion coersion catapulting a cataclysmic conversion
One of the most awe-inspiring of the Earth's meterological phenomena is the vortex, a tight, rotating funnel cloud of water or wind. In Greek myth, this is represented by the female monster Charybdis, the offspring of Gaia and the sea God Poseidon. An encyclopedia definition of Danse Macabre, Eileen!
If I EVER see a cloud like that, I am OUTTA here! YIKES!! Living in Tornado Alley, I have seen some funky-ass clouds! LOL Excellent poem that is charged with power; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2006
Those clouds would scare the .&!! out of me! Great descriptions.
Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2006
a poem that packs some power, even the short and punchy form adds to the power.
Wham, bam thank you, Katrina... or not, as the case may be. But, my, that photo is both eery and captivating... like something out of a Spielberg movie. We never cease to be enthralled by the sense of the macabre, perhaps... just at a safe distance, for most of us! Strange how the most devastating things can have an awesome sense of artistic or intrinsic beauty about them... you have captured this well, Eileen, thank you. Kate xx
Brrrrrr.... your words make me shiver! Excellent piece!!
Peace.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2006
Dottoes Carmen, with this caveat. You, in this short but intense piece of poetry have explained everything any sane person needs to realize that there is a great possibility that this is the fire and brimestone foredoomed for this planet's future. Damn! When you hit on something, you are awesome (hate that word, but it fits).
Eileen, this is one of the most powerful pieces I've read in some time. Indeed something to make one think and fear the future, lest we change something.
Has powerful shades of Dante's Inferno, as this world hurtles towards self destruction, mankind seems hell bent on wiping itself off the face of the planet !
This is a wake up call to the decent remnants of society, who are still resolute, and willing to stand up and fight their corner, for what they hold dear and cherish in their lives.
This is a terrific beginning to my evening reviews !
And what a spectacular and eye catching photo !
Love
Peter
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love and peace...Carole
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Good gracious, what an ugly sky. But your words bring beauty to the storm--powerfully written and presented, this is excellent!
I agree with Karen: I see a sky like that in real life, I'm gone, baby, GONE. LOL
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Daddy update: doing a bit better, maybe this weekend or Monday he'll have the surgery. Will keep you posted, and thanks for the prayers.
If I EVER see a cloud like that, I am OUTTA here! YIKES!! Living in Tornado Alley, I have seen some funky-ass clouds! LOL Excellent poem that is charged with power; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love Tinka
Peace.
Carmen
This is a wake up call to the decent remnants of society, who are still resolute, and willing to stand up and fight their corner, for what they hold dear and cherish in their lives.
This is a terrific beginning to my evening reviews !
And what a spectacular and eye catching photo !
Love
Peter
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