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My Shooting Star
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Alone with the moon I watched the ocean waves crash upon the rocks

A beam like a shooting star came out of heaven landing next to me like a shadow

I felt a warm presence, and  knew it could only be him

The elusive phantom I love that emanates only rarely, but oh so lovingly

I watched the waves roiling before they came gently shivering  on the sands

Excited as they matched my emotions perfectly I felt so in tune

My body pulsated to their rhythm as  if we were connected

Sensing him as the waves collided with the rocks I inhaled him

When the water curled back away from the shore I exhaled him

Passionate emotions came over me to do something  wild wonderful and wicked

I felt something grasp me and take me joyfully into the orgasmic ocean

Whatever enchantment we were under the wet wondrous sea caressed us in winsome ways

Back on the sand,  there was a beautiful feeling of being enveloped in an ethereal essence

Like the sun  slides behind a cloud so had he slipped into my life

Like my shadow that goes with me wherever I go he clings to me

He is the beam of starlight that came to earth to be with me forever

eT

 
 


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 Reviews of "My Shooting Star"
Reviewed on May 2, 2006
A mystical, magical write, well complimenting the beautiful picture.
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2006
Breathtaking! Both piece and picture!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on May 2, 2006
Capitivating writing Eileen!
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on May 2, 2006
The picture, the words, the music-
You weave such a spell.
Enchanting, precious, touching.
High 5.
:)
John

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 2, 2006
Stunning work Eileen!!

Have to steal this pic....lol....kick me!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 2, 2006
nicely done

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2006
Imaginary lovers the best kind? Hardly. But the scene projected within this poem is like a prelude to the real, very real, thing. What else to say? You thrive on this kind of romantic stuff when you incorporate the elements into it.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on May 1, 2006
this is very serene eileen. you always conjure up a sense of oneness with all things in the universe. oh, and wonderful pic. i think you and i are frustrated space travelers. ~ sara

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 1, 2006
Imaginary lovers...sometimes I believe that they are the best kind. The sensation is that we have somehow been joined with thes souls for all eternity and though not walking the same path in this lifetime, we are never far apart and find ourselves escaping with them from time to time. Beautiful poem, Eileen.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 1, 2006
this is really quite beautiful ... wonderful atmosphere, passion and imagery ...

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2006
gorgeous write

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 1, 2006
Romance under the sky in undulating water that covers every pore until we are one immersed and clean as pure as a running spring from the mountain of love. Splendid write Eileen.

Reviewed on May 1, 2006
Eileen~

Lovely write; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 1, 2006
a beautiful piece Eileen
this I enjoyed much
thanks

William
Love & Peace

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 1, 2006
Eileen
You have a wondrous astral traveller companion by your side..
And thank you for sharing this fabolous and awesome experience with us...
Who said dreams don't come true...:)
And I believe I saw a Lamb in your terrific graphic !
Love,Peace and Harmony
Peter

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 1, 2006
I know the feeling. We desinielt are sister with the same appetite for romantic poetry.
Susan


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