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From a Dream (or nightmare;-)
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The sky seemed to split right down the middle
and in the gap a kaleidescope of vivid colors
bursting like fireworks  creating  a cacophony
of sounds, as many hued rays looking like shards
of crystal fell from the sky like rain, so beautiful
a sight that all who saw it stood in awe


And just  as quickly as the amazing beauty of such
an unprecendented event took place, it changed
and the sky surrounding the gap became a roiling
mass of clouds so dark it was like night without
any light at all except for the multicolored rain fall
which sparkled like glass and in fact anyone that
it fell upon was being sliced and bleeding profusely


People became aware suddenly that they were being
injured, some of them mortally, then a panic ensued
with everyone running to avoid being hit, but  found
they could not escape being touched by the rain,it
was falling on everything causing much damage,people
were crying and shouting for help as they realized
what was happening, but all were in the same fix


The ground began to form pools of  rain turned red
from the blood that was dripping from peoples wounds
then the sun came out shining so bright one could
hardly see the thousands of angels who came from the skies looking like silver bullets until they came closer, to
minister and heal the people and the earth returning
everything to the way it was before the opening gap
occured.  When angels left all was as it was, except a
gap remained, like a huge white light in the sky, no one knew why...


etw-2006


 


 



 


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 Reviews of "From a Dream (or nightmare;-)"
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
Hit by a plague of Hail, oooooeeeee, getting close to the bone literally.

Yes, this world is being shaken and sifted..
Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
The times, they are a-changin'..........so rapidly, we can barely keep up with the page-turning now!

Eileeen, as I was reading this, over and over again, came the Scripture....'I will pour out my Spirit on all flesh..'

A prophetic write to be sure...

Love&Prayers,
Rhonda


Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
Sounds like a short story to me. As you know, my dreams are a great source of my short stories (and poems). The first stanza reminds me of my first novel, The Kaleidoscope Effect. And then the slicing and dicing (not by rain but by remote control) is a future chapter dreamed for my current novel, American Mole.

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
Another outstanding dream write with images so vividly painted!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 20, 2006
Reality came through all too clear in this dream/nightmare of yours, Eileen. Perchance have you been reading Dean Koonts lately? You've painted an awsome picture here...with your words.

Micke

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
You really have some vivid dreams Eileen...profound writing!

Carole

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on September 19, 2006
Nightmareish t me, Eileen and in such amazing detail.. Someone asked me the other day if I dreamed in color and I honestly didn;t know thew answer! You obviously do!
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 19, 2006
When Hell rains down and the sky opens with positive energies of healing then God is working at his best. You have an inside with a calling such as this Sis!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2006
Like Peter I heard a song when I read your poem, Peter Gabriel's 'Red Rain'...this poetry with its thought provoking imagery, may well indeed prove to be prophetic, sooner than we think. Bravo ;) Love Panda:)

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on September 19, 2006
Wow! Simply awe-inpiring! -- Jeff

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2006
You know my views on the happenings of this world (now it's Thailand). I have not changed them, rather reinforced them. Victor

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2006
Ouch! For a while there I was beginning to believe you had a prophecy-dream, where Iran had the nukes and was sending us a few of them, just to get our attention, seeing as how the world doesn't.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 19, 2006
I'm glad my dreams are not as vivid or scary although I can forsee such an event happening if we don't keep our guard up.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 19, 2006
You have perfect recall for nightmares; I have to adlib most of it, though I am not sure which is better...or worse...Ed & Rufuz (w00f)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 19, 2006
You truly do have some fascinating, and chilling, dreams, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2006
You always amaze me with your poetic masterpiece muse..Keep em coming!!!

Love, Dove

Reviewed on September 19, 2006
W O W, Eileen, you blow me away with the intensity of the storm! Powerfully imaged and penned, great work!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 19, 2006
Wow Eileen

Quite apocalyptical and scary scenario unfolding here in vivid and stark terms and description..

I was reminded of Bob Dylan's classic song " A Hard Rain Is Gonna Fall "...

Visions of radioactive fall out featured in my mind..

Love

Peter

Reviewed on September 19, 2006
Powerful imagery here, Eileen; hope you are okay! You are in my prayers today! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(


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