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The Air You Breathe
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I touched the air that you breathe
and my body thrilled to the thought
I whispered to the night "behold
what magic have you wrought"

Enchanted by the stars that shone
pointing  to where you were
I allowed my mind to take flight
knowing what had to occur

Glorious supernal solar flares
Blazed across the skies
My heart was racing madly
with your vision in my eyes

The zodiak was scintillating light
like different colored gems
I felt  I was in an exciting  dream
or  caught in one of your poems

The lights emblazoned lit a trail
I knew that soon we'd meet
I felt the stirring  of your soul
as in my heart you beat

etw
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 Reviews of "The Air You Breathe"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 3, 2008
Love depicted in the cryptics of a beautiful poem. You are a creative poet E T. Jon Michael Willey
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Reviewed on May 1, 2008
lovely versetility Eileen, smooth as a babies bottom, hugs
Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Eileen

Beautiful

Doug
Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Ditto on Caryssa's comment!
Awesome!
Love,
Becca~
Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Beautiful!!!
My favor ....I felt the stirring of your soul
as in my heart you beat
But I love it from beginning to end
Absolutely Stunning!!
Peace Love and Hugessss...Morning Star
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Beautiful. Liz
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Great write... I especially loved the first line.

Cryssa :~)
Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Marvelous write...I can say no more, thanks for such a beautiful well written poem.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Wow, if only I could have dreams as delicious as this treat. Your loving and generous nature really comes through in the spectacular beauty....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Absolutely stunning! Love Holly
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed on April 30, 2008

A wonderful painting... "The Air You Breathe" came to life with the colors of the rainbow of romantic-spiritual love.

May The AUTHOR of all of us – live poems – keep feeding the humanity of our minds to nourish the eternity of our souls.

In respect and admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Surely a breath of fresh air you always share with us, Eileen! Especially so when you take us into your cosmos. Beautiful images, your words...and the pic, too.
Blessings and love ~~ Micke
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
What a joyous meeting and way it came about. Naturally it is a great poem coming from you. **********
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
You sure took us for a ride with this fresh of breath air,, Well Done!!!
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Thank you for sharing this kiss of breath Eileen, you have given life and breath to many beautiful poems. Hugs and Blessings!Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by RM Green
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
I see the fires still rage within you, ET!! Wonderful piece, and I can truly relate...

Keep those embers smoldering!

RM
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
For sure we have become part of your words Eileen, thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
I think we all got caught up in your poem...Great read
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Loved this beautiful poem for it was definately a touching of the heart. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Eileen,

EXQUISITE perfection - sigh -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
What a lovely piece, Tiger Lily.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Wondermuseful..
Love ya!
Ron
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
this is beautiful to me
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Beautiful writing sweet lady...stay safe and well...Hugss
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
This is a most beautiful write Eileen. Great job. God bless.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Full force love within this amazing offering . . . Yes indeed . . .
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Eileen,

I agree with Bernice. That last line is life's line. A perfect ending to an outstanding poem. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
That my Piscis constellation be upon you to inspire and protect, making that sweet words in your poem my own ears worth of.

Georg
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Smooth as silk is the flow of this delightful poem.
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
love the theme, the rhyme, and the rhythm of this one!
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Your words shine like the eyes of beauty glaring upon an oasis of beauty. GBQ
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
So beautiful, Eileen! I loved every verse of this incredibly beautiful poem! You know how to set the mood on this starry breezy night ...
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Beautiful writing, Eileen.
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
this is extremely beautiful but that last line stole my heart!
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