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Belmont Stakes Triple Crown
by E T Waldron → (All Poetry by E T Waldron)
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At Belmont Stakes today Big Brown
Has hopes for a triple crown
The colt who won the Kentucky Derby
and Preakness,needs a big bless

But the story behind the headlines'
Is Jockey Kent Desormeaux's  son
9-year-old son, Jacob, has the genetic
disorder "Usher's Disease"that stole his
hearing at birth and is slowly robbing him
of his sight,there is no known cure

The boy is known to be always smiling
never complains,is happy and smart
hopes his dad wins with all his heart
for he may never see him in another race

I saw him on TV and he stole my heart
I pray his father wins to give Jacob
a memory  to picture in his mind that
will never depart!

If he wins it will be the first triple crown
win in thirty years!

The action takes place this year at Belmont Park, Saturday June 7, 2008, post time approx. 6:30 PM ET.

GO BIG BROWN!!!

  Horse line-up (may change)  :


          1 Big Brown               
2 Guadalcanal
3 Macho Again
4 Denis of Cork
* 5 Casino Drive
6 Da'Tara     
7 Tale of Ekati
8 Anak Nakal
9 Ready's Echo
10 Icabad Crane

etw-2008 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Belmont Stakes Triple Crown"
Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on June 12, 2008
Man, it would have been have been the perfect head on beautiful mug of ale, had he won. Let's hope the boy will someday win his own triple crown in life.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 10, 2008
Wish he could have won it! I still wonder if he was kicked by the horse in front of him. It was a heartbreaker for many...M

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
lost my socks in this one ... there is something gone awry ... perhaps an investigation into the steroids given to Big Brown before the race ...

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
I am keping my fingers crossed for him, he will win, I know!!! with that attitude he has, he is already a winner.

Reviewed on June 9, 2008
I have seen Kent Desormeaux with his son on TV. His love and compassion for the wee lad is tangible. Though lost at Belmont, he has most assuredly won the race of life.

Thanks, ET! :)
Julie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
ahh--the story of this little boy--very touching--i better not get in the whole "Big Brown" thing--nice write though!

Reviewed on June 8, 2008
Eileen,

Unfortunately, not to be - but at least he got to see his Daddy race - that accounts for something, knowing everyone was behind Big Brown - a beautiful, compassionate pen - well done -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
It has always amazes me how little children born with horrible diseaeses or dibilitating disorders always carry the biggest smiles and are so tolerant of their conditions. They never seem to complain or show any bitterness. It tears at my heart each time I am exposed to one of them. May God bless them each and everyone. JMW

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
For me the ponnies were always those coming with a war-party, and you didn't bet nothing against them...
But, goooooooooooooood luck!

Georg

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
...all lines to give the finish...hope...the miracle of a race wished for Jacob...and a winning ticket for the heart.
excellent write Eileen...
John

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
I know nothing of horse races but enjoyed your wonderful poem. I'll go with the one you want to win :) Hope he wins! Yay! Wonderfully written, Ai'lina ... (((honi honi)))

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Well I almost miss reading of this event
I pray and hope he wins
It would mean so much to his son
A perfect gift as you wrote here in your poem
Too keep in his mind
God be with him and his father !!
Wishing them many blessings!!
This is a very beautiful sentiment writing
From your Heart Eileen Peace Love and Light..And hugesss
Too..Morning star

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
We're waiting for the big count down and we're praying Jacob gets to see a magnificent win that will remain in his memories forever. Eileen this is such a thoughtful wonderful write. Big Brown's hoof is in excellent shape & he's ready to ride!

Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Just a half-hour to go 'til the gates open on possible Triple Crown winner. Exciting.
Very sad about his son, and for other children with the same disorder (Spencer Tracy's son was one, I've just heard).
Run swift and sure Big Brown!!!!
Oh, love your poem, Eileen...got excited about the race :o)
Blessing and Love dear Friend ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
I thought he had a bad leg or hoof or something that might keep him out of the race at Belmont, guess I thought wrong...I know Rene will watch the race, she is a horse lover...ed

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
This is just about 5 miles away from me in Belmont N.Y.

I went over to our OTB betting parlor and placed 2 bets on our loving and Long Island horse named Big Brown. I played two exacta's with him on top of course. I hope he wins the triple crown but if by some misfortune he doesn't we will still love him.Denis of Cork and Icabad Crane are my picks to come in second. The triple will be those three horses in that order. Hooray for Big Brown.I hope by some miracle they can cure little Jacob. We will pray for him.

Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Oh, I hope his father has won!!! Did he? I'm sadden to know Jacob is deaf at birth and then slowly going blind. My heart goes out to him! May God bless him all his life!!!

Sandie May Angel :o(


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