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a real fantasy;-)
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I've been unwell,pain meds
play tricks on the mind;-)

~*~

It was a horse the color of  royal blue velvet,
I watched  it swish and sway,
prance and pivot I wanted to ride it,
but it wouldn't accept me

It wouldn't allow riders it was a horse
of mystery, there was a lot of foliage
and the grass all different  than I was used to,
and I wondered where I was

the golden sky was incredible casting a warm glow, here I was standing in grass that looked like snow but it had a yellow sheen from the suns rays somehow I couldn't remember any other days

I wondered how I got here and shed a
few tears then the horse of blue came over standing near as if he understood
that I was in a state of confusion
something was telling me this was more than illusion

suddenly he allowed me to mount him, and
we rode away- it was like flying  above the ground in glorious array we we're covered by  a rainbow of colors so grand we arrived by a waterfall and I got off  to stand by it

I named the horse Berryblue, he stayed
by my side til we were refreshed by the waterfall enough to ride, we rode until it was almost dark, I knew not where Berryblue seemed to know and was
without a care

soon I was enchanted  soaring up into
the sky of indigo I was thrilled and didn't care where he wanted to go, we reached the stars and to my utter delight we lost ourselves in  the beauty of the night~

etw~

 


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 Reviews of "a real fantasy;-)"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 20, 2009
an oxymoron of a title, glowing rich with imagination and promise Eileen -- may this ride be the ride to recovery and wellness my friend -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 13, 2009
a gloroius fantasy!

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
Eileen,
Glorious fantasy, imagination, enchantment and the longing of the soul. Yes!
I wish you a speedy and full recovery.
John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
Mystical & Magical.........: (hope you are feeling better!)

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
Ah pain meds...are you sure you weren't on the merry-go-round at the state fair? LOL Enjoyed. Patrick

Reviewed on July 11, 2009
Wonderfully penned, I enjoyed
The Buzzard

Reviewed on July 11, 2009
What a beautiful jouney, I was enraptured by it. No Disney or Hollywood could compete with that, you shared a most precious moment, very uplifting, very spiritual, Bless you and Hugs!

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
I enjoyed reading your fantasy, full of strong, vibrant visuals. Well done!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
THIS WELL WRITTEN, VIVIDLY CLEAR FANTASY IS ENCHANTING. WHEN ONE IS RESCURED FROM TEARS...REFRESHED...AND THEN FLOWN UP INTO THE HEAVENS, THAT IS A GOOD FANTASY AND REMINDS ME OF HOW 'HE' RESCURES US IN TIME OF TROUBLES. ENJOYED, THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
Sounds like quite a trip, sis; I hope Berryblue visits you again when you need him.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
Little Sis, that med you took, came labeled from New Jersey? if so, no wonder you went riding on our Space Cadet turf!

EDvard Ole Brother

PS. I hope you will be fit for Rufuz party!


Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
Great job with this fantasy, Eileen.

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
What a wonderful fantasy!You wrote it so well!

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
You've experienced a "good" trip, I hope you never get a bad one...e

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
seems like the pains meds are making you feel better ... enchanting poem indeed ..

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
colors, imagery and vivid. Thank you for sharing this one, I enjoyed the ride. I have to throw in Awesome too. Be Well, Carin'

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
'in the beauty of the night'

I love blue too, etw. Gorgeous swiveling of a color, a mood, an atonement, a laugh, health and you.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
A wonderful fantasy. I love the hoses... both real and symbolic. Enjoyed.


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