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Looking very Swank
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Looking very Swank

Standing at an intersection Waiting for the little man to turn green I see my own reflection In the screens of a passing limousine Just to manoeuvre around was quiet an endeavor As it turned the corner seemed to take forever The little green man is now nervously tapping his foot I think about crossing but then decided to stay put The back door of the limo stopped right in front of me All the windows were tinted there was nothing I could see As the car idled the electric window slowly sank Sitting in the back a beautiful lady looking very swank She smiled at me if to say I am here and you are not I felt a bit funny since she put me on the spot Then I leaned through the gap and whispered in her ear Please drive a little forward your car is on my foot my dear��

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Reviews of "Looking very Swank"

Reviewed by Samuel Stone

Reviewed on March 28, 2007

Cute story, excellently written, entertaining, and fun to read...
Wishing you well...
Sam

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on March 27, 2007

Oh, throughout your poem the song "Taxi" by Harry Chapin cam to mind until.......until, your punch line. Loved it.
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on March 27, 2007

Dave,
Excellent poetry! Very creative! I enjoyed reading this.
But your poor foot!:)

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 27, 2007

Excellent my dapper Dave. Limos aren't what they're cracked up to be. They're very uncomfortable, especially getting in or out. We had them in our fleet of tour buses long ago. Never could reason the idea of limos and their fame.

Love.
Susan

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on March 27, 2007

Enjoyed this my friend...great write from beginning to end...loved the surprize ending...read smoothly, loved it!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 27, 2007

Thank you for sharing your wit and humor. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on March 27, 2007

Outstanding composition in imagery and contents... "Looking very Swank"
is a wit-beauty poemization ~ poetized to enchant and inspire.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 27, 2007

Well you didn't need that foot anyway...LOL, very funny, thanks for the morning laugh...Ed

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 27, 2007

OUCH! Those swanky folks are somethin.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 27, 2007

hah! I completely enjoyed this poem, especially the end! good job and thanks for the early morning chuckle

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on March 27, 2007

LOL, this is a great poem, Dave! I enjoyed this from start to finish, never expecting your twist at the end! Excellent!
Love,
CJ

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