love fall gentle on my heart
like first snowflakes of winter
caress petals of the last rose
fall quietly ‘til you cover me
in a drifted blanket of purity
until my faults are hidden
beneath perfection’s beauty
and the bard discovers me
worthy of poetic remembrance
in black footprints of his ink
on tip toe like an evergreen
to welcome the softest kiss
let me silently glisten ‘neath
sacred deluge of virgin white
for the star guiding me home
Belle, your words did fall "quietly "til you covered me" with the purity of love's gentle fall upon my psyche -- how ineffective of my ability to express when I simply say, a beautiful piece of work my friend -- peace and love to you -- Jon Michael
La Belle...I love love love & adore the emotions
spoken inside this embracing poem
especially the 2nd verse....dreamy & perfect!
Peace, Love & Inspiration
Vickie
I loved so much about this.
I don't know why I didn't get the music on this one, tried refreshing and all that usually works.
But these words seem fine on their own.
Wonderful.
I saw your tracks on the snow going where that star was calling to, and your words, "...on tip toe like an evergreen to welcome the softest kiss..." told more about yourself and your heart than we will ever know.
This write makes me want to light a fire and have some hot chocolate with marshmellows and cuddle up on a bear skin rug with my someone special...wow you bring the romantic out in me..Lovely words romantic poetess.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
SOMETIMES THE SPIRIT OF ALMIGHTY GOD IS LIKE A RUSHING MIGHTY WIND AND HE DESCENDS...MOVING US IN A MARKED, FRENZY MANNER BUT THEN THERE ARE TIMES WHEN HE COMES...QUIETLY...AND HIS 'LOVE FALLS GENTLY'
YOUR CAPTURE OF HIS TENDER APPROACH IS AN EXQUISITE...ARTISTIC PERFECTION. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Like Sleeping Beauty so this is, Belle. Waiting for first love's kiss to drip, drift, drop upon your lips and awaken the fir(e) within. Delicate as a snow-angel's breath. xx
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2009
Ah, you reached for the stars here and they were yours . . .
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2009
Belle, B*e*a*u*t*i*f*u*l (ALL)
Deborah
Reviewed by Richard Arrington (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2009
This is a wonderful write. May you have a blessed and Merry Christmas.
Finally, the commentary that adds even more to the diagramed version of The Easy Study Bible. Follow the diagramed verses of this new clear translation with a verse by verse commentary. Understand even better the New Testament book of Philippians.
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Because we have an opportunity to choose our attitude and focus our intentions in the present moment, the world and our own personal lives are a reflection of our thoughts. It is our 360 degree review on how we think. Put simply, our job is to fully
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spoken inside this embracing poem
especially the 2nd verse....dreamy & perfect!
Peace, Love & Inspiration
Vickie
I don't know why I didn't get the music on this one, tried refreshing and all that usually works.
But these words seem fine on their own.
Wonderful.
John
that comes to mind is beautiful. -gene.
written with classic beauty.
How deep are the rivers of your heart.
Happy Holidays ...
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Sheila
love & peace be with you
William
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Regis
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Blessings and love,
Susan
YOUR CAPTURE OF HIS TENDER APPROACH IS AN EXQUISITE...ARTISTIC PERFECTION. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
GOD BLESS
Tony
Purity of thought, image, expression, a sensuous healing prayer.
John
Deborah
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.