I felt myself wading in the waters of this delightful poem…
It has a lilting rhythm akin to the sea and its tides…
and really captures the transience of time…
I truly enjoyed this piece…and so artfully written…
The waves roll in, the waves roll out. That you have a passion for poetry, there is no doubt. I sense a bit of sadness in this poem of beautiful thought. The painting seems to be an inspiration for the poem.
As always your language of the heart glows warm and tender in this piece...capturing the intricacies of the ocean and love. Well done my old friend.
Fee
There is an introspective, melancholy air to this lovely poem that I truly like: measured, balanced and insightful. It reads beautifully. Excellent work.
Intuitively, I know I've lived many lifetimes, and none more interesting than the one I'm living now. However, being born an old soul somehow did not excuse me from the same job I share with you and that is learning to craft a positive attitude about
Well done my dear poetess xo
It has a lilting rhythm akin to the sea and its tides…
and really captures the transience of time…
I truly enjoyed this piece…and so artfully written…
Diana…🌿
Ron
Fee