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DOOMED LOVE
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They met in a tropical storm Lovers once Best of friends perhaps His sour mash temper No match for tragic tears Acid avalanche Stark reality Reared its ugly head She told him to go to hell I’ve been there already said he Her coal black eyes Piercing Filled with seething rage Subtle hint of fear Melancholy gaze No answers found that day Only more confusion Rueful disconnect Mindless admiration Severely dashed hopes Sacred dreams Lay bleeding in the city street She simply walked away As if she were invincible A soul must be set free Or it shall cease to be © Bill Grimes Jr. 2009

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Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey

Reviewed on April 24, 2009

The crux of a sad story, Bill. Thank God that broken hearts can mend. Yours, it seems, has mended well. Keep writing, friend, and I will continue to enjoy your posts. :-)

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on March 2, 2009

Hello Bill,

This is a strong poem but a factual one, there is a destructive kind of
love and we have the choice to free ourselves from it. Great write and remarkable last line: "A soul must be set free or it shall cease to be."
You write so well, Bill.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on March 2, 2009

Bill,

A passionate and heartbreaking write. You could feel the pain of this love gone wrong. Beautiful.

Mary

New Poetry by Bill Grimes Jr.

My Brother who shot himself 2 days ago.........Rest in Peace dear Paul........

PAUL

A short piece I wrote in 2005......it seems so appropriate to share it again now......

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