Senryu Chain (5/7/5): Mission Accomplished (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 7, 2005

Thank you for your well-expressed feelings. I share some of them. The impact of it came to me in a dream. What I saw on the 13" TV screen took quite awhile to sink in. I was actually there when the foundations were laid, and I stood on the observation deck a year before the towers came tumbling down. I worked nearby and looked up at the towers so many times on the way to work.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 7, 2005

Wonderful poem. Words sometimes heal more than pills. Thanks Karla for this excellent offering.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 7, 2005

Well said Karla, you put in words the feelings of many and I thank you for such a tribute to fallen country men and women

Felix

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on July 7, 2005

Splendid!

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

Reading this was a jolt back to the day the planes stopped flying..I live right near an airport and the silence was so eerie and just enforced the horror...Kudos!!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

It certainly does, Karla. Great chain and an excellent response to the challenge.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

Superb senryu Karla. What a fantastic answer to the challenge.
I must applaud you for surpassing it. Kudo's!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

They all touched me, Karla. This is inspiring and sad at the same time. You brought it all back . . . That is good. We muc never forget, but I am afraid more than should have already put it in the back of their minds. Shame.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

Just Remember Our ThoughtsAre So Powerful,i.e.Think Good You Write Good_

Think Bad,i.e You Write (Think) Bad Things Destroys All Even You As Writer Dies In Vain Pain!

TRASK

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

A fine chain of Senryu that more than meets the challenge Karla !
Peter

Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

I would say you met the challenge with flying words or is that colors
Oh Darn I keep confusing my metaphor or is that Met-Her-for

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

An excellent poem for the challenge, keep the great writing up and God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

Outstanding poem for Michelle's challenge Karla, this is excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

(((Karla)))

Wonderful response to Michelle's challenge; you went and exceeded beyond the call of duty! BRAVA, Poet!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

Gifting bestowed through the fires of pain and despair... where words have been choked and are sometimes inexpressible, the muse has often unlocked and awoken the spirits of the bards and the poets to speak for all those whose mouths have been stopped with grief. Beautiful answer to the call and the challenge, Karla. Bless you and thank you. Kate xx