Senryu (5/7/5): Sweet, Sweet Slumber (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

What a cute Pic Karla! Very sweet indeed!
I am sure the kitten is having good dreams
of lots of mice at hand! LOL.
Good Senryu too!
Becca Lang

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Am I the only one who thinks that this is less about sweetness and more about surcease? Either way-well done.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

enchanting!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Such a cute picture with beautiful words to match!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Entering dreamland with a best friend is always a marvelous thing, Karla - and this is a lovely Senryu.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Yep, I can feel that feeling taking me over... I'm just gonna have to pick him up and squidgy-squadge him right into my neck and hold him tight against my chest and squish the living daylights out of him... sorry, maternal instincts can be ferocious sometimes; like how I can never resist sleeping babies either (KKK could have a field day with me!)... but, hey, he's asleep anyway ain't he and I'm SURE I won't give him nightmares... will I?! Look at the smile on his cute little mouth... like my 87-year old mother without her dentures... :)) LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

**Melting**... How can anyone possibly have anything but heavenly dreams, when snuggling with an angel like this? :0) You too, my friend, are such a sweetness, may you always have only beautiful dreams, that come through in all your mornings.
Many blessings of Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Hell of a cute shot, is that a mouse that kitten is holding, must be practicing for when it grows up...Ed

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

This is so delightful!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

This one is adorable!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Karla,this is wonderful and the pic so so sweet

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

we all need a friend like that! sweet dreams, Dawn

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Ooh, what a cute picture! The look on the kitty's face actyually shows that she's having pleasant dreams alright - full of cheese and cream ... lolol! Beautiful adorable write!

God bless, Karla!

Sandie.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Dear Karla,

May you to have pleasant dreams. The joy of best friends. Gorgeous write.

warm hugs and love
Elga

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Awwwwwww adorable....love it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Sweet both poem and pic
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Awww that is just so sweet.

Paul;-)