I used to do the same thing, imagining the clouds were different things, it certainly helped on long road trips when I was younger, I have to agree with Carole, this is a delightful write...
God Bless
Michelle!
The title is quite an attention grabber, Karla! It surprised me that it is about clouds when I started to read. You soar with the kind of imagination that a poet needs. The discipline of visualization in art work is very beneficial to producing writing. When we can visualize, then we can write poetry like this. I am very visual and work with inner imagery letting the images come at their own gait. Good verses!
towering cumulonimbus
clouds built a home for my
imagination to take flight;
borne on the wind, i was
given clearance.
(you know, of course, that extreraem polysyllabics really turns me o...)
It is interesting what your mind can do when we take a little break from working and worries about storms and letting positive thoughts remove you from the drudgery of life and fear of things you can't control, isn't it? Fantastic flight of fancy and accompanying picture; perfection! BRAVA; vey well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
But you do fly Karla. With your dreams and poetry your creativity takes you aloft with ease and when you return you always give us a personal glimpse so very eloquently.
Love and peace,
Susan
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2006
Believing is the name of the game. How the hell you know you can't fly if you don't spread those arms, take a running start and jump off the cliff. Gotta love it!
The gifted and fascinating Urban Poet, Asa D Seeley, once again speaks. He introduces a New Genre of Poetry...Reality Confrontation. Juxtaposed with Essay and staying true to his unique style, Asa brings a breath of...fresh air...to the world of poet
Deputy Dave Jenkins investigates the murder of local high school principal, Jerry Egge, but this is a multi-faceted novel that deals with spiritualism, romance, friendship, and children who fall through the cracks.
"Murder isn't usually this
Deputy Dave Jenkins investigates the murder of local high school principal, Jerry Egge, but this is a multi-faceted novel that deals with spiritualism, romance, friendship, and children who fall through the cracks.
"Murder isn't usually this
God Bless
Michelle!
Love and hugs, Birgit and Roger
love and peace, Carole
Love Tinka :)
Sage
iove this --- especially --
towering cumulonimbus
clouds built a home for my
imagination to take flight;
borne on the wind, i was
given clearance.
(you know, of course, that extreraem polysyllabics really turns me o...)
i ove the humour evident in the whoole piece
good write
l & h
john+
It is interesting what your mind can do when we take a little break from working and worries about storms and letting positive thoughts remove you from the drudgery of life and fear of things you can't control, isn't it? Fantastic flight of fancy and accompanying picture; perfection! BRAVA; vey well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
I can thats how I know why,
Fly can you through out your dreams,
Just wear your parachute or we will hear your...
ed
It's all about belief..
Excellent composition, Karla
Peter
Love and peace,
Susan