What's Real (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 30, 2006

I'm praying that those storms are over and gone with
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed on April 30, 2006

So sorry you have to endure those terrible storms, hope it will be over soon. However, you took perfect advantage and turned it into a great piece of art!
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

The intensity of the power of storm and its namebrand thunder & lightning and total devastation has been many a source of songs, poetry, and movies. Storms have a universal media appeal. The dreamer is subconsciously aware of the power of storm, Karla! Reality is marketable!

Sage

Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

perhaps the weather is just our fears manifested

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

WHAT'S REAL weaves terror into power and beauty. Great poem.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

Karla
I always treat thunder and lightening as a marvellous feast of Mother Nature...
Love and Peace
Peter

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

With your flare for creativity and your words so wise and vivid you've given me a poem electrified as only you can do Karla.
Beava!!
susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

VEry real indeed and the reality of storms are they affect everybody differently.

Felix

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

Vivid imagery Karla...good writing
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

Weather. We live in it. Can't get away from it. If we didn't have weather we wouldn't have.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

Very intense write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

are the storms real?

I would guess most of them are, Karla, but many storms are often found only inside our minds.

Here's hoping none of them plague you.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

Now, just lie over there, and be quiet.
I'm going to watch this new movie about the 9-ll plane crash in Pannsylvania. You don't mind, now, do you? Do you?
Sleep well. - Bill

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

Lightnings always gets me into strange moods, for it always followed by loud thunders that are expected to follow. Whevener it is loud, I always imagine something or someone is going to hurt.

I like it whenever it rains, but I don't like the thunders and the lightnings.

Wonderful pciture and well-expressed poem!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 29, 2006

Karla,

What you experienced last night was very real. I was there right with you, and I can understand your fears. It is truly justified. Here's hoping for relief soon from your fears; you are in my prayers this stormy season! This write captures the terror that you clearly experience; very well done and presented! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(

No matter what others may say, you. are. NOT. crazy! You have a legitate fear!!