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Unfriendly Soil
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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"....they left/their virginity behind/on unfriendly soil; ...."


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... from the age of innocence
to the rage of war; they left
their virginity behind
on unfriendly soil; boys no
more; they came home, only to
be spit upon; hated; whores??
who were raped by the system
that had no use for them: shame
how we've treated those who served;
abused, to be forgotten ...

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (3/23)


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 Reviews of "Unfriendly Soil"
Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 26, 2007
Amen, my friend. Well-said, well-expressed.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Zahala San Simone
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
It is a shame how we've treated our soldiers--especially the ones that have been injured. Relevant write.

Wendi

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
I agree great write.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
OH HOW CREATIVE KARLA this one is powerful........... and so very true...

Blessings,
josie

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
it's a horror story! i agree. thanks for posting.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
That's because our world's systems are completely sick and alienated to this beautiful gift of a planet. Thought-inciting, Karla. Merci. Ton ami de la C-B, Canada; amour et paix,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
Emotive writing Karla!!

God bless!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Verica Peacock
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
A very true and touching poem, Karen. You're a sensitive soul
Lots of love and hugs, Verica

Reviewed on March 24, 2007
SAD! VERYSAD!YOU say it WELL Karla!
What a shame this has happened!
It tears at my heart and makes it bleed!
YOU have touched me once again!
They sacrificed so much for so little, is how I feel! :(
And...WE call this country Freedom!

WArmly,WArrior Lady Sheeeoox

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
shame
how we've treated those who served

A damned big shame, too.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
Vietnam consequences played out in real time.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
George Washington didn't cross the Delaware, fought and spit on the wonded soldiers that couldn't fight no more when things got bad.
We are doing it.
A Vet's ward needs $ 286,33 per day per man to help the wounded.
Instead...
A Purple Heart cost the government $ 7,14 to produce, more cheap!!! and no care attached.
Thanks, because you care.
Georg

Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Deeply touching poem. Thanks dear sister. Pleasure to read you always

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Such indignity, such a terrible injustice to all. Deserve so much more. Love, respect, admiration, and so much more. Thanks Karla.
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
oh my...this struck home more ways than one, Lady Buckeye.
This is bluntly honest and unfortunately true.
My hat is off to ya...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
I think things are better now than they were when soldiers returned from Viet Nam. With Nam, the soldier was blamed for the war by the media controlled (baby-boomer) masses. I think most of us have grown up enough to understand that the soldier is the defender of freedom and has nothing to do with the political climate that exists. Being a soldier is a really difficult job filled with sacrifices, and I believe that every person should serve and learn to defend themselves and their right to freedom. "Only those who serve, know the true taste of freedom." The media is not obligated to tell the whole story nor are they banned from stating their opinion in a tone that sounds like fact. Sensationalism sells papers or gets us to tune in, and people love the drama. The soldier gets caught in the crossfire and can come under ridicule for things he/she had no power to change. A most potent offering, Karla.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
You have an instinct for these writes Karla! Very well done!

Eileen

Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Horrible the way our military men and women are forgotten, this write however is awesome
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Heartwrenching...not only Vietnam, but now in Iraq and Afghanistan; they are filling unwanted shoes, knowing what awaits upon their return home. The soils are unfriendly, not only over there, but here as well. Shattering!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
War hurts everyone :-(

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
poignant, and in some cases, so true. -- Jeff


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