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Song For A Crippled Soldier (Chorus)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Georg Mateos' "Song For A Crippled Soldier" inspired this one...thank you, Sir, for your service. Semper Fi!


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... put out to pasture,
to live on next to nothing
with only our pain

and nightmares to keep
us company.  We took the
oath to defend our

nation, travelled to
foreign shores to do battle
with the enemy,

not realizing
the enemy's here at home,
in our own backyard ...

what good are medals?
They don't buy food; they don't pay
the bills; they don't ease

our suffering:  you
promised to take care of us,
looked the other way

when we came rolling
home ... how's that for gratitude?
how's that for honor?

Fool us once, shame on
you; fool us twice, shame on us,
for believing the

songs you sang to us:
patriotic melodies
that had no meaning.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (4/16)

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 Reviews of "Song For A Crippled Soldier (Chorus)"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 19, 2007
Outstanding write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
Very painful truths within this poem. Well written; well expressed disappointment.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
I know that I can't lessen your pain and the disillusion that you most feel toward everything and everybody, but remember soldier, it is people that let you down, not the Nation, be proud, and up and after the moment of your death, your should hold your head high.
Clench your teeth one more day.
Semper Fi.
Georg

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
GW blames the Democrats for not supporting the troops while it's plain to see that he is the one who could care less about their well-being. The democratic-led congress is now calling all the Bushits onto the carpet. The day of reckoning has come!

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
It is a sad fact swept under too many carpets for too long a time, and now it is coming to the forefront, I applaud you for this poem and your prior service! WTG! Karla...

Kive,
Eileen

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
Sadly, this is so true. Well penned, Karla. Let's all see if we can make the difference, make the necessary changes! Let's be part of the solution, not part of the problem.
Love and respect,
CJ

Reviewed on April 16, 2007
Hearttouching and powerful!

My heart weeps concerning this situation.
Blessings to you,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
wow, this is one of the saddest parts of any war. You are always remembered in my home.
Love Rebecca

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
Dear Karla,

First and foremost, I salute you - and Mr. Mateos - for your service to God & Country! And ALL Servisemen & Women!

Then, I salute your writing gifts, and the power with which you have brought this unsettling - and disgraceful - subject, under a magnifying glass, as it were.

I hope the Son lights it up, and it burns a hole in the hearts of
those who have defiled the name of the American Soldier!!!

Much love, respect and prayers always,
Rhonda

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
Yes, this topic is just too profound for words. God Bless. Gloria

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
It happens much too often.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
Armed forces or civil servants who dedicate their life's work to a government and a country they believe in should be treated with dignity and respect...both the US and Canada treat ours with disdain time for a change...

Fee

Reviewed by Jane Wallace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
Karla,
As wars become the normal in a world that constantly says it wants peace, as we lose more and more good people to enemies that have no value for human life, as problems mount and answers are few and far between, we do forget the ones, that make it possible for us to enjoy the freedoms which, many other countries, do not give their citizens.Yes, we have forgotten too many times our soldiers and the Native Americans, We have forgotten so many in this country, including our honored veterans.And maybe if we could just stop long enough to think, we might remember, when we look into their faces, what we are fighting for and the cost of freedom. We need to honor all our promises.

Jane

Reviewed on April 16, 2007
Karla~

This is difficult to read, especially since we as a nation no longer seem to care for those who gave their all to defend all that we hold dear. We care more about what happens to those who come to our nation illegally than our own people, especially the veterans like yourself, the elderly, the poor, the handicapped--you get the picture. Sad state of affairs we have created for ourselves and for our very own people. Something drastic needs to be done to help those who served, and it's time we say: "ENOUGH IS ENOUGH!" How about helping our own instead of us being the world's police?? Powerful cry for action, for change, for solutions! BRAVA, one of your best!!

Thank you for your service; you may feel like you haven't served (since you didn't leave Texas), but honey, you DID serve. You helped people who were hurting or suffering, and that is more than what a lot of people have done in their entire lives. You have made a difference, and God is watching out over you. Good things will happen to you for what you have done for our country; I salute you!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

I pray you get the help you so rightfully deserve!!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
It is a national shame. Thank you for bringing this up. The more awareness brought forth, the better we'll be.

Carmen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
Far too true, I'm afraid, and quite painful to read in this, the Home of the Brave, the Land of the Free. And we all need to start standing up for our veterans, right now, and demanding that our leaders and politicians start providing them the medical care, the benefits, and the respect, that they so truly deserve from all of us.


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