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Tired
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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M O R E storms forecast from Saturday night through Thursday ... and yes, some could be severe. ENOUGH already ... I'm t i r e d! Please keep Karen and I in prayer.

Image (c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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... Shell shocked from the barrage
of artillary fire
in dark skies; tired of
running, I'm tired of
watch boxes, tired of
dodging bullets, tired
of hiding in bunkers
that don't exist, tired
of living with fear, just
t i r e d:  I'm severed out --
this StormSpinner wants the
 storms to stop spinning.  I
can't handle much more of
this.  Nerves lighting up like
radar screens on TV,
just waiting, waiting to
be annihilated.  :(

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (5/4)

 
 


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 Reviews of "Tired"
Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on May 12, 2007
WoW! An intense, well expressed awesome write! I inspired deep emotions in me! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on May 6, 2007
A very powerful write.. I can imagine how you must feel with all these frightning tornados. After being in the 2004 hurricane season here in Fla in really understand.. Hang in there and don't let it get you down.. Remember ,, YOU are not alone! Some one very special is watching over you..........God IS ALWAYS THERE!.......m

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2007
Despite the horrible conditions - your writing is remarkable. An apt and horrifying description. Madly praying.

after this.... move

love,
Kathy

Reviewed on May 6, 2007
We do feel for you, knowing how much it troubles you, but it also loads your pen and lets you write in new ways each time!
Love and Hugs, B&R

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 5, 2007
I am sure that a few veterans from Korea and Nam will tell you the same; of sleepless nights after nights and days thinking every moment that's my last minute, I'm gonna buy the farm for sure.
But we survived, and we are not alone; if nobody understand you, be sure that you have quiet a few thousands of comrades in arms to push you a little more when you thought that you couldn't.
Georg

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on May 5, 2007
Sending Prayers to you so sorry about all this.
going on in your life.
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
Look at the up side, no more drought! Lakes and rivers are spilling over their banks. Water shortage no more. See, there is always a bright side. Now duck and cover!!!!!

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
send it our way...well without the severity...just some rain will do!
Keep safe and keep writing...its releasing wonderfully!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
mother nature...for all her beauty does have a dark side, doesn't she? As you recently commented on a piece of mine, perhaps it is because she too is tired of what we have been doing to her.
I do hope you ladies are safe...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
Me? I am tired of all the rain :-( Sorry to hear you are experiencing all the storms.

Reviewed on May 4, 2007
Wow Karla I am sorry you are going through this, remind me to quit complaining about the rain here LOL! I'll take that over the weather you are having anyday of the week
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
Your poem catches the mood to perfection! I pray it will soon cease so your stressed nerves can go back to normal! Keep the faith!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
I think I can relate!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
My prayers are with you two angels - Karla and Karen - for your safety. Yes, perhaps a move to a much safer place will do you all some good. Please take care of yourselves and be well.

((((( Big HUGS )))))

Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
My prayers are with you both
just don't stop praying, he hears you
peace be with you

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
Scary and tense, this write shows your feelings and fears in the light of reality. Hope all goes well and I will keep fingers crossed for you both.
Hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
Karla, you and Karen are in my prayers! Be safe.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
YOu've penned the the real perfect storm. This prose is so creative and I can feel it as if I were right in your backyard. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
My goodness! Karla, your poems have put me in the eye of the storm and I can nearly feel their wrath. I'm glad I don't live there.

Reviewed on May 4, 2007
(((Karla)))

I pray the storms stop spinnin' too; e n o u g h already!! God must hate Texas....that's why we get the worst storms; that's what I think. Scary storms we've had; we don't need any more severe in our lives! Very good write and pic; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sis, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
I will keep you in mind. May the Lord still the storms around you.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
Oh Karla you are in my prayers sis!!

Be safe sweetheart!!

Love Tinka


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