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The Price Of Freedom
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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A terrible cost ... thank those who served.


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... They gave you their all,
up to and including the
last breath in their lungs

because freedom is
precious, worth the sacrifice:
remember the cost.

A terrible price
paid with the blood of soldiers
who laid down their lives ...

and if they come home,
wounded, broken, remember:
they did it for you.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (5/15)



  

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 Reviews of "The Price Of Freedom"
Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on May 18, 2007
Amazingly so did Jesus over 2000 years ago. His life so that we can have eternal life with Him. And yet, many turn their backs in unbelief. Will they not do the same for those who fight for our freedom here on earth? These poor wounded soldiers should be treated with more respect from their Governments. They should be greatly rewarded for their pain and suffering. Are they?
Great write!

Peace and love
Lena

Reviewed on May 18, 2007
A friend of ours is down at the vet hospital PTMD right now, he was in Vietnam and the memories are starting to haunt him again, he certainly is a hero in our eyes,as are all who served here and abroad, I salute you as well...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
True words here that you wrote, those who serve in the military are un selfish they risk their lives for all of us. Bless all of them. Thanks for this write. We all need to be greatful for the military and Thank them.
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
How true, what a wonderful write with a powerful message! I have a little boy in my class whose dad is in the military...he's been in Iraq for sometime now! I was so excited when I answered a knock on my class door and it was his dad coming to pick him up! Imagine how he felt, when I called his name and their was his dad standing there! It was a beautiful moment!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
Yes and often for a government that wants to forget them and toss pennies to pay for services rendered. They deserve better...

Fee

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
too painful to think about.

Reviewed on May 15, 2007
great poetic dedication Karla

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
Touching piece Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on May 15, 2007

"The Price Of Freedom"
A powerful, truthful, and heartfelt senryu!
I loved it and the sensitive messages it carried.

Sincerely,
From the Heart...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
Indeed. And to think They're letting the third in line go over to fight...

Reviewed by Joyce Rapier
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
Well said, Karla. All of us who have never served in the armed forces can not fathom what the veterans feel or comprehend the emormity of a vicious battle. All veterans should be applauded for their bravery and held high with deep regard. It is my prayer for all the soldiers to come home to be with their families and have peace in their lives and souls. God bless them all.

Reviewed by Ruth Rey (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
And, when they come home, try to understand that they went through hell and back, have seen their buddies blown to pieces, the ugliest face of humanity. Try to understand they cannot talk about it, but should. Try to understand what their mothers, wifes, lovers went through while they were in a far-off land, fighting for the freedom of others. Try to hear them, try to hold them, try to help them cry all the tears they are now drowning in. Try to help them come back to life and live again.
Deborah

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
Amen!

Thanks to all who have served in the past and are now serving.
Dan

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
Thank God for our soldiers...they deserve every honor we can give them! Enjoyed!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
and if they come home,
wounded, broken, remember:
they did it for you.

May we never forget.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
ALL GAVE SOME...SOME GAVE ALL
Semper Fi
Georg

Reviewed on May 15, 2007
Karla~

"and if they come home
wounded, broken, remember:
they did it for you".

WOW. That last stanza says it all. We need to learn to thank our brave men and women who answered "The Call" to defend our country, and our country is better off because OF them. Thank you, dear sister, for doing YOUR part. You may not feel you served, but honey, you did. You volunteered to go into the service. You did your job to the best of your ability until you were injured. For that I am eternally grateful. God bless you, dear Karla! You are a real life heroine!

Powerful, heart tugging poem that speaks volumes! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D *SALUTE!*

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
They come home victorious, whatever their physical/mental state, not drowning but waving... the least we can do is to wave back and acknowledge their life-giving service in our stead. Nobly said, Karla. Keep them home-fires burning. Bless you and thank you. K xx

Reviewed on May 15, 2007
So easily they are forgotten and must even fight for the right to be taken care of materially by their country. Powerful poem Karla.


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