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If You Get This Letter
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... You know it means I won't
be coming home ....


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Darling,

If you got this letter,
you know it means I won't
be coming home.  I'm so
sorry - didn't want to
end things this way, without
one last goodbye, one last
day with you.  Don't be mad
at the military:
MY decision to come
here, to try to make things
right, to help a people
have a better life than
they did.  Maybe one day,
they'll have the freedom we
have.  All I ask is that you
don't harbor anger and
sadness in your heart.  I'll
be waiting for you - don't
stop your life because mine
has ended.  Don't let my
death be in vain - live.  That's
the way to honor me -
by remembering I
loved you and gave my all.
That's the way I want you
to live - giving it your
all.  And when you take your
last breath, know this - I'll be
the one taking your hand
and welcoming you home,
our new home - together,
forever.  I love you.

Your loving,

Husband/Wife/Dad/Mom/Brother/Sister/Son/
Daughter/Uncle/Aunt/Nephew/Niece/Cousin/
FRIEND.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (2/25)

Daughter of/sister of/niece of/cousin of Veterans, all branches, and an Air Force Veteran, myself.  God bless our Troops!

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 Reviews of "If You Get This Letter"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Karla,
Sad, yet so beautiful in spirit. It takes a special person to join the military. It is a person who cares about others more than himself or herself. The soldiers and their families give up so much! I know I am grateful. Nicely done! Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
I loved this letter...hope our soldiers never have to send one.
Thanks

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
This is the perfect sentiment for a hard reality of war. May all our troops come home safely so their loved ones will never have to endure the pain, even if it is filled with love, of a letter good-bye. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Such a beautiful well written letter which I am sure many will hold dear, Thank you for sharing Karla.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
What a heartfelt write, Karla. ALthough sad. it's beautifully written.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Truly heartfelt, Karla. If only many more honored our valiant vets, as you do.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
At Arlington, we should replace those stones with trees, for every one of them, because we could then, celebrate the end of a soldier's life with the begining of another life.
SEMPER FI

Georg

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
...thank you so much for this letter Karla...though sad...makes one proud of our soldiers...who defend our freedom to live...and write.
excellent...
John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
beautiful sentiments and well expressed--reminds me of a popular country song with a similar theme -i think by Tim mcgraw

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
sorry Karla couldn't read the whole poem way to close to home for me,again....July....... 2nd deployment again this yr.
stan

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Moving, intense and sad. Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Sadly, I guess that's one letter every soldier has got to pre-write and carry in his kit - and when it comes to war, it's there job to go where they're ordered and fight their best, not sit around and argue about the reasons for and against - and that's the hard truth as admininstration keep changing - You express well the pain those left behind must feel when they get that letter - but the joy of reunion in that last paragraph!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
This was very heartfelt; it brings to life all the tear-stained letter envelopes most mothers, sisters, aunts, and wives have held close to their hearts.
Beautiful writing, Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Splendid letter Karla, because you say what I've heard os many soldiers say, they are proud of what they are trying to do, and hope it will give others the freedom we have while protecting ours at the same time. Bless you, for too many only see the negative side. I hate war, and hope this one is over asap, but I am very proud of our soldiers and the reason they are fighting for.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Very poignant letter, with a powerful punch...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Karla,

This poem is so sad and yet, so needed in this day and age. I am reminded of Tim McGraw's "If You're Reading This;" a song I dearly love, yet cannot listen to without crying for 20 minutes or so.

I hate the fact that our servicemen and women who do fight for us all, so often come home to less than happy homecomings. Yes, they may be saluted at the forefront, but sadly.... once they return to civilian duties, the fact that they went through war and made it home to tell about it, is often forgotten, as are their needs.

Bless you for your service and God bless all of brave Armed Forces for the selfless work they do!!!

Jill

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Hi Karla--You may not want to hear this, but I was in the Air Force, too, and was never welcomed upon returning. Often I was treated like the enemy. Better not to come home. This experience is not uncommon among veterans that I have met. But maybe you were one of the lucky ones.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Amen.

Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Salute.

be well and happy,
Kathy

Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Heartbreaking write that too many military families have faced: getting that letter they wish they never received. God bless our brave men and women in the military and let's support our troops! If it weren't for them, we would not be free and have what we have today! Too many people have forgotten that. Sad!! Powerfully penned tour-du-force!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Thank YOU for YOUR service and I'm glad we never got this letter! (Thank God!!)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
This is so sad yet so true for many brave Soldiers!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Every American should read this and remember those in harm's way with prayer. Your words are powerful and timely. Rebecca

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
AH... this one is a tear jerker! So much negativity is put on the armed forces for sending soldiers to Iraq, etc... yet such little is shared about the faith and the reasons these warriors fight. They fight for US...for OUR freedoms, for the rights and freedoms for others in the lands where they are fighting... I am humbled by their dedication and their love for all of mankind. We should be so grateful for their sacrifice...

Cryssa :~)


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