AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Bob mitchley #shock stories, iRiley Blake, iWilliam Manchee, iRoxanne Howe-Murphy, iMargaret Mullings, iRobin Ouzman Hislop, iChristina Neely, iGibbs Williams, iJ and C Wordsmiths, iTichaona Chinyelu, i

  Home > Biography > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Sponsor Me!
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 3,370 Titles
· 56,897 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Dec, 2001

Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Memory, or Lightning Safety
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

Image (c) 2006, Karla Dorman


Poem Artwork

There's a charge in the air; one feels the
atmosphere r.amp up for something huge.
Suddenly, all is white hot light and
bullet.crack of thunder --- the tree falls,
a casualty of war in the
skies.  (It was my favorite, the old
maple that had stood faithfully on
the border of yard and woods --- the
one that gave me summers of climbing
pleasure, the one that blushed vivid red
in Autumn, the one the raccoons made
a home in.  It exchanged its life for
mine, took the shot in my stead --- never
got around to thanking it until
now.  Thank you, Tree.  I could have been --- you ---)

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (6/11)

www.stormspinner.blogspot.com

 


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Memory, or Lightning Safety"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 14, 2008
Your beautiful friend, the red maple. Dashed in the kinetic flash of nature's fury. A beautiful photo and poem. Your emotion for things in nature is clear. Thanks. Stay safe and crowd the pages with your beautiful poetry that we may share in your wonderful style. JMW

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 12, 2008
What a thoughtful write!!! I love the pic of the tree too.

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on June 12, 2008
Sad for the tree but glad it wasn't you! Wonderfully written, Karla ... hugs - Tiana

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 12, 2008
Karla, great depth of power in your words, a stunning poem,
amd sad the loss of such a tree!...ET

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 12, 2008
Tell Thor that he should cool off for a while and stop throwing those lightning because the Olympics haven't started yet.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 12, 2008
I remember once when I was expecting my third child, we had a horrible storm and lightening struck the mountain ash in our front yard, and I cried. Funny how tied we can become to things in nature. Beautiful writing, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
Wow, the comparison to the tree and injecting that twist of fate, so vivid and well done...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
well written--i could feel the emotion

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
Well done Karla. Very nicely put into words.

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
A great way to tell a story...
I am always amazed when I look back on my life that I am still alive... so many times when things could have been so different...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
I like the personal relation to "the tree" you loved. But YOU'RE RIGHT: I'm a stickler for "Lightening Safety Rules". The "rainy season" just started here in Ocala yesterday with big boomers and about 3 in. rain BUT it's the cloud-to-ground lightening in FL that kills the disbelievers every year. (we usually have a few casualties because here in FL most people wait until it rains to get out--TOO LATE! But I know you understand... Michael Guy

Reviewed on June 11, 2008
Powerful write here Karla, that pic reminds me of a tree at Nonna
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
Trees are very much alive with energy. This tree knew you well, and was happy to do this for you.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
Karla, a wonderful tribute to your old maple tree.
I often think of myself as brother to the tree. - gen e.

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
The change is Obama! The Bush will be weeded out. :)

Reviewed on June 11, 2008
Karla~

I remember. Vividly imaged, you recall that old tree (we called it "split tree," remember?) in loving lines of sacrifice. Well written, brava!

(((HUGS))) and love, your twinklies, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
...in life many things leave...your write of beauty remembers something...that never will.
wonderful thoughts here Karla...
John

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
Old trees have so much history--as yours obviously did. I bet the birds and squirrels will miss it too.


New Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Popular Poetry (Biography)
  1.  I knew It was You
  2.  A Eulogy
  3.  Thomas Chickenbone
  4.  Happy Father's Day, Sweet Daddy!
  5.  Hope for a Better Tomorrow...
  6.  My New Fur Babies
  7.  A Head Of Cabbage
  8.  Upper Room Pentecost
  9.  I Dreamed Of Mommy Last Night
  10.  A jolly good fellow
  11.  A Jack Of All Trades
  12.  On Your Retirement
  13.  Nothing
  14.  Scout's Honor
  15.  When Love Begins
  16.  Sky Rider
  17.  Joy Returneth!
  18.  My New Line of Jewelry
  19.  Collage para Luis García-Abrines Calvo
  20.  As if by Magic...
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Dorothy From Kansas Meets the Wizard of X by Linda Alexander

Sexuality is very misunderstood.What if the tornado dropped Dorothy not into Oz, but onto the shooting set of an X-rated film? Eric Edwards makes sex films. Period... Sex-on-command. Sex-for-hire.... So begins the story of Eric Edwards, Mr.  
Member BookAds

Short Stories: The Story of a Refugee by Rea-Silvia Costin

This book is a collection of short stories that depict events in Author's life while she lived in Romania, then in Greece, and last in America. It's a beautiful and very sincere account of a young woman's life and comming to age.  
Member BookAds

Abducted Alien: A True Story of My Life and My Experience with United by Chris Belec-Joanet-Joannette

AVAILABLE TODAY 2012! PRESS RELEASE, June 1, 2009 A True Story of My Life and My Experience with United States Immigration I was an Abducted Alien by Department of Homeland Security... Startling memoir is about a woman  
Member BookAds