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Blood Money?
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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A rant ...


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What will a one time payment
do to improve our situations?
Will it lift us out of the hole?
Will it put food on the table?
Will it keep us off the streets?

Will it pay the bills?  Doubt ---
meanwhile, Freddie and Fannie
and AIG still handing out big
bucks like candy to the monied
few --- Veterans get a one time

check for $250.00!  What will
we do with that windfall?!?  It
seems cemetaries and hospitals
worth more --- billions needed
to overhaul, they're broken

beyond repair --- what about
broken Veterans?  Why does it
feel like I'm accepting blood
money?  Thank you for your
service, take the damn check,

shut up and stop bitching!  We
could have given you nothing
--- well, thanks for nothing.  It
really will help.  What, haven't
quite figured that part out yet ...

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (4/3)


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 Reviews of "Blood Money?"
Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on April 10, 2009
excellent rant. most pay more in taxes than I live on in a year, but I remember God is my sufficiency and there is food on the table and a roof over my head. Pity their souls when they face their maker...
Hugs, Your frined, Kathy

Reviewed on April 6, 2009
KARLA - pardon my 'french' - but you've heard me say it more than once before -

politicians = lying greedy RAT-BASTARDS ...

EVERY TIME THEY 'THROW A BONE ' to the little guy - it's like a philanthropist who is worth BILLIONS donating a mere Million $ 'out of the goodness of his heart' to something -
they get all the media hooplah AND a healthy TAX DEDUCTION to boot!

liars - cheats - disgusting corporate WHORES ...

tk

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
You should read Jerry Engler's latest article...hee, hee, hee...I laughed and laughed. You might find some humor in it as well.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
Reality and trueism . You've said a lot in this poem.Some times I just don't understand how these things can happen.........M

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 5, 2009
You said it well, Karla. A rant well deserved. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 4, 2009
Well done Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on April 4, 2009
Well done Karla. They are throwing scraps to starving dogs, please excuse the image here but it is pathetic the way most of your citizens are treated. We need to take a lesson or two from some of our immigrants, I'll speak for Canadian immigrants here. They pool their resourced, often living together in one house while setting each other up in business, or by paying to educate some of the kids in high paying professions. They live in community not in isolation where everyone is forced to fend for themselves. In a system such as this, no one goes hungry and no one does without. I have East Indian friends and I love the way they look out for one another. We need to do the same. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on April 4, 2009
A worthy rant it is! These little tidbits are like crumbs that tease the tastebuds to make us wish there was more. I do believe in free enterprise and people working for what they get, but when I see our tax dollars going to executives in great amounts I certainly want to holler and rant, too.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 4, 2009
if only more were aware of the complexity of the spin and weave of our current financial debacle, and what it is really mean to accomplish for the ambitious socialists, the cry would be heard 'round the world -- once again, the populous has been duped by devious politicos -- fine piece of some awareness here Karla -- the tea parties will increase -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 4, 2009
I will endorse those 250 bucks coming my way to the Veterans Fund, for once it will be not my money going there but from the sponsors that gave us Korea and Nam vacation trips.

Semper Fi
Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 4, 2009
I hear ya, but having visited numerous VA hospitals and veteran cemeteries over the years, I can tell you that many of them are in abysmal shape, and they need vast improvement.

As for the $250, I agree, it ain't much at all, but compare it to what Bush gave our vets -a Big $0.

Reviewed on April 4, 2009
Once again wisdom flows from your pen.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 3, 2009
If you as a vet can't rant than who can! Tellin it like it is,I only wish it could make a difference! Well done,Karla!...ET

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

Karla you have every right to rant and rave, the injustice is so glaring, veterans have AIDS!!!! (Acute Income Deficiency Syndrome)
A very strongly worded poem - your pen strikes home! Great appropriate title, a real grenade launcher.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 3, 2009
nicely written and expressed--your line breaks accentuate it well

Reviewed on April 3, 2009
Hi Karla, a very honest rant, too! The truth is what hurts us, because our country does nothing about it, except killing others, then ourselves. What a wicked world it is...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 3, 2009
This is right on and rightous as we continue to allow our governments the power to give to the rich what they take from the poor. You tell them Karla.

Fee

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on April 3, 2009
Thank you Karla for keeping us aware of what is going on.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 3, 2009
$250. won't even last a week, not even $2500. or thousand, but that is better than this paltry amount...you keep tellin' us and those that will listen...Ed

Reviewed on April 3, 2009
It is a sad situation that our country is in, I am praying for you.
In Christ's Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 3, 2009
$250 to keep our heads above water for a week or so. In the long run, too many will still drown however. I hear Brack's going to change our type of government's name next. Something to the effect that, "We will no longer live in a Democracy here. The United States of America will now become an "Obamanism." Sound familiar? God have mercy on us all.

Reviewed on April 3, 2009
Something is most definitely wrong here, I fear...powerfully penned sadness; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on April 3, 2009
Karla, Have u heard something that I missed??? I'll take that $250 blood money... even tho I too know it won't pay for much...but hey...rather take the crumbs since the big stuff has to go to the THIEVES AND ROBBERS of the country!!!! Hmmmmmmm.... lindalaw


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