Vertigo, or: What a Ride! (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Swan Son

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

Enjoyed your artful imagery as you travel to find your God. Susan

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

A great write as usual Karla. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

"Smack-dab in the middle of God's eye! Great, "In the Land of Oz" words, Karla.I truly enjoyed this adventure into atmospheric fantasy land.
Your friend in Southern California, Mark

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

Karla this is so picturesque in its imagery, just adore it...
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

Very descriptive. Made me dizzy. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

good write. LadyJ

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

love this!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

What a Ride, Indeed!

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

Karla,
What a great way of seeing things... I love the view.

John

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

Please don't do it when He's playing chess with me, don't need the distraction!

Georg

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

A great poem here Karla, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

This poem has such a lightness and airiness to it... it makes me want to smile and sing.
Beautiful!
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

Wonderful poetry. I love zipping past the clouds, though I'd hate to smack god in the eye.

Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

Very nicely done, Karla. Ever been in an airplane flying through a storm? It's all there. I don't think I'd want to 'plop' into the middle of God's eye, though. Not good to irritate him.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

..great write Karla :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

Well done, Karla.

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

falling up, quite a concept and poem

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

Love the energy in this one, Karla. Great work:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

Outstanding write and piccy (Cap-buster deluxe!! LOL); that's the way to confront the Beast known as StormFear! Very well penned/illustrated; brava, StormSpinner!! You spin poetry that makes people appreciate the weather, good and bad! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

Terrific descriptions. Just like sailing on an eagle's wings the way you've described it.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

Gotta love those aleman-left's, don't ya know. Zooming past the puny little cloud and looking for the meanest, baddest, mo-joker in the sky, Karla's gonna ride you to the ground sucker!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Shedding Light

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

Awesome!!!

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

Storm, waving hello to
Earthward-bound lightning
bolts,.....

Best weather poem with vivid images captured in the best way possible. Thanks dear karla. your brother and friend Abdi-Noor

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

Very nicely done with such wonderful striking images Karla, enjoyed a lot.
hugs
Fee