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Matter of Perspective
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... A cloud shifts its load, dumps: ....

Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman


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The
sky.  Is
falling.  Again.
A cloud shifts its
load, dumps:  an end
less train of wet.  And on
the other side of the tracks, a
child looks into the heated face
of the sun and begs for an end
to the drought that took the
grass and his Mommy two
years ago.  Ours verdant
with celebration of life
that is in the
rain ...

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (9/12)


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 Reviews of "Matter of Perspective"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
Nicely penned, Karla. Enjoyed,
Sheila

Reviewed on September 14, 2009
Great job Karla keep these words flowing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 13, 2009
Very nicely done and love the raindrop formatting...
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on September 13, 2009
Beautifully crafted, elegantly presented. Water of Life on a sizzling land--thanks, Karla!

Reviewed on September 13, 2009
All in the shape of a raindrop. Nicely done, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 13, 2009
Dumps can truly be wonderful!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 13, 2009
A drop of rain made of words? A tear? Or just a key hole to see the wonders beyond with the eyes of a child?

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 13, 2009
Imaginative and powerful Karla...love the shape.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
We're ready for some rain here. Excellent poem. Patrick

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Love the shape of this poem...and the meaning.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Substance for reflection, Karla; so many place need benevolent rain. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Power in your pen today, and quiet creative
Louisa

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Very nice poem, Karla. I like your smooth transition from "An endless train of wet" to "the other side of the tracks."
We have had much RAIN this summer, but have to remember to thank God for it. It keeps those water tables healthy.
Love, Connie

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Karla,
There's sharpness and depth in your obervations and feelings in this fine writing.

John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
A great write Karla. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Right again, Karla. -gene.

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
This is great Karla and so creative the way you typed it and your expressive words. Thank you for writing it.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Beautiful work, Karla.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
BEAUTIFUL WRITE AND A GREAT PICTURE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
great portrayal of perspective. nicely done.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Yep. Rain on one side of town, sunshine on the other. Happens all the time.

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
very powerful, Karla. funny how there is always that other side of the coin to any given situation.

Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Powerfully written shape-poem, Karla; looks like the raindrops that fall outside! Very well penned; brava~!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your (damp) twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on September 12, 2009
I love this poem Karla. Yesterday it was blue skies and 102 degrees here in my part of California. Today it's gray skies and the pitter patter of rain. Not enough to do any good, just enough to splatter summer's dust around.
Have a great day,
Marcia

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 12, 2009
Powerfully written, Karla. Well done indeed.


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