Gross.
Disgusting.
Ugly.
Fat.
Don't you think I don't already know that without you rubbing
it
in
my
face
that I'm not the person y o u
think I ought to be?!?? I am
trying
to
do
something
about it. Cutting down and
walking more. Don't need
your
help
or
rude
comments about my weight
to know no one wants to see
me
as
I
am.
God forbid someone would want
to make love to me, since seeing
two
fat
people
kissing
makes you sick: why the hell are
you in my bedroom anydamnway?
(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (10/28)
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Reviews of "Don't Need Your Help (In Response to Maura Kelly)"
"Sticks and stones" my dear. Always consider the source which in this case appears to be a useless bag of debris. I'm a bit of a pumpkin on stilts, but I still like pumpkin pie:)Patrick
I dont know what Maura Kelly said but I have been hurt by ppl words too u deserve better than this, you are beautiful as you are! Don't let others judge you
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Karla, in one ear and out the other. I would waste no more time or thought on this person. Ignorance overloads the cups of many people.
Truth be known she is undoubtedly the one that really needs some serious help. I am just one of the numerous friends and fans that support you. Carry on as you have in the past. Being our Karla the StormSpinner. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael
Theres something inside us all. underneath that human form. WE write we speak we live we are entitled to more than 'just a label'
You have me on your side now! and I'm darn sure there will be plenty others too.
You have a new gang now..The Authors Den Gang.
'Go Karla'
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2010
Excuse my French, but fuck her all the way to holy hell! You're beautiful Karla!!
Everyone has their own faults and imperfections even if they like to pretend they don't, and the ones with the worst imperfections, whether they are visible or not, are usually the first ones to point fingers at others. Frig em Karla...
fee
That's tellin' em, Karla; I think you are beautiful! Don't let people's rudeness bring you down; you are much better than that! Rise above it!! And I agree with Mark: people need to keep their fucking mouths shut!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(
I did not read Maura Kelly's comments to you but I still go by the rule: if you can't say something nice,then just keep your mouth shut. No one has ever talked me into loosing weight or, when I smoked, to stop smoking; these decisions must come from within yourself. Just be happy that this person is not part of your life that you have to live with.
Your friend in Southern California
The story of Ron Hull, paralyzed in a surgical accident back in the dreaded polio epidemic days, was able to overcome most of the stigma and stereotypes and "pass for normal" for 30 years. As Ron's paralysis increased gradually through the next 20
Sheila
In Christs Love
Michelle~
peace, Carole~
Truth be known she is undoubtedly the one that really needs some serious help. I am just one of the numerous friends and fans that support you. Carry on as you have in the past. Being our Karla the StormSpinner. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael
You have me on your side now! and I'm darn sure there will be plenty others too.
You have a new gang now..The Authors Den Gang.
'Go Karla'
fee
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(
Your friend in Southern California
Maura Kelley (whoever that is) sounds like one nasty person. Be your beautiful self and ignore other's cruel remarks. With love and friendship
Mary