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Don't Need Your Help (In Response to Maura Kelly)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Gross.
Disgusting.
Ugly.
Fat.
Don't you think I don't already
know that without you rubbing
it
in
my
face
that I'm not the person y o u
think I ought to be?!??  I am
trying
to
do
something
about it.  Cutting down and
walking more.  Don't need
your
help
or
rude
comments about my weight
to know no one wants to see
me
as
I
am.
God forbid someone would want
to make love to me, since seeing
two
fat
people
kissing
makes you sick:  why the hell are
you in my bedroom anydamnway?


(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (10/28)


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 Reviews of "Don't Need Your Help (In Response to Maura Kelly)"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
"Sticks and stones" my dear. Always consider the source which in this case appears to be a useless bag of debris. I'm a bit of a pumpkin on stilts, but I still like pumpkin pie:)Patrick

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 2, 2010
Good thing writing toughens our skin, Karla. I'm not sure if this is a creative poem or a real problem you had. Hope all is well. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed on October 29, 2010
I dont know what Maura Kelly said but I have been hurt by ppl words too u deserve better than this, you are beautiful as you are! Don't let others judge you
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 29, 2010
People like this Kelly person just take up space...not worth your time to acknowledge her ignorance!
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 28, 2010
Karla, I don't know who Maura Kelly is, but when will people like this ever learn to keep their mouths shut?! You're beautiful Karla in every way.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on October 28, 2010
Karla, in one ear and out the other. I would waste no more time or thought on this person. Ignorance overloads the cups of many people.
Truth be known she is undoubtedly the one that really needs some serious help. I am just one of the numerous friends and fans that support you. Carry on as you have in the past. Being our Karla the StormSpinner. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 28, 2010
Tell like it is, Karla. And shame on Maura Kelly. -gene.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 28, 2010
That's telling her, Karla. Good for you girl. God bless.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 28, 2010
Never heard of the bitch so she must be a nothing around these parts. God love you and always keep you smiling. You are a cherished doll.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2010
I won't be apologizing after I say to Misfit Kelly, I hope you die an agonizing, lingering death, bitch.

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring
Reviewed on October 28, 2010
Theres something inside us all. underneath that human form. WE write we speak we live we are entitled to more than 'just a label'
You have me on your side now! and I'm darn sure there will be plenty others too.
You have a new gang now..The Authors Den Gang.
'Go Karla'

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2010
Excuse my French, but fuck her all the way to holy hell! You're beautiful Karla!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 28, 2010
Everyone has their own faults and imperfections even if they like to pretend they don't, and the ones with the worst imperfections, whether they are visible or not, are usually the first ones to point fingers at others. Frig em Karla...
fee

Reviewed on October 28, 2010
That's tellin' em, Karla; I think you are beautiful! Don't let people's rudeness bring you down; you are much better than that! Rise above it!! And I agree with Mark: people need to keep their fucking mouths shut!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on October 28, 2010
I did not read Maura Kelly's comments to you but I still go by the rule: if you can't say something nice,then just keep your mouth shut. No one has ever talked me into loosing weight or, when I smoked, to stop smoking; these decisions must come from within yourself. Just be happy that this person is not part of your life that you have to live with.
Your friend in Southern California

Reviewed on October 28, 2010
Karla,

Maura Kelley (whoever that is) sounds like one nasty person. Be your beautiful self and ignore other's cruel remarks. With love and friendship

Mary


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