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Really, God? © 2013, Karla Dorman
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Please keep my oldest sister in your thoughts and prayers. And twin sis and me, too. :(


Poem Artwork

Rug pulled out from under
my feet with the news that
one of my family is very ill.

I never wanted anything
bad to happen to them.  I
have never hated them.

I wouldn't wish this on 
my worst enemy.  Really,
God?  Weeks?  A few

months at most??  And
now I'm the one filled
with regrets for things I

might have said or done:
Lord God, have mercy.
Don't let it be too late ---
 


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 Reviews of "Really, God? © 2013, Karla Dorman"
Reviewed on July 10, 2013
Karla,

I can't imagine the unbearable pain you must be feeling knowing of your sister's impending death. Know that I am praying for both you and Karen in this most difficult time in your life! God love and Bless all of you for going through this!
Mary

Reviewed on June 12, 2013
I pray that we can resolve our differences and reach out to her in her time of need; I am in a state of disbelief and shock .... please pray for us and especially our oldest sister; she needs a major miracle!

Powerfully penned sadness; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( *Tears!*

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 12, 2013
I'm glad you're able to reconnect with her. I'm sure she did and said some hateful things in the past, but you can forgive all that and help her in her time of need.

I'm going through some things with my sister right now, but I love her and will help her for as long as I live.

Let's hope that your sister's illness is easily overcome.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on June 12, 2013
i hope you are able to have time to do that which you wish to do
budd

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 11, 2013
My prayers will be with you all, Karla.


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