Developing Lives (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 6, 2006

Lately, I have concluded that not all share in the inherited memories. If we all did, then we would all know the same truths. And clearly there are many who don't. Jude, a most excellent poem. And wonderful graphic. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 5, 2006

Why am I reminded of 'The Days of Our Lives? Good write, Jude.

Ron

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 5, 2006

Great graphic. Our minds open to the ever "developing
lives" we lead. So true.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 5, 2006

Well done Jude and so true, the mind is the real path that opens before us in this life and only our ability to open it to all restricts how far this path will take us. As always you make the reader pause and think which is such a great thing for a writer to be able to do.

Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 5, 2006

Oh this is very well done Jude....great package...and the art just stunning!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

Like a mind-expanding drug, this poem grabs hold of the reader and propels them into a sea of splendor and endless possibilities. Reaching beyond that which we can physically prove and stepping into the next dimension helps us to believe in the promise of eternal life and joy. A perfect Jude poem!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

It is the most wonderful thing if we were so lucky that the first stars that formed were also the brightest! Developing Lives deciphers the blending blueprint for the cosmic dawn. A 23-line poem read in a one-minute animated film, a picture of theory, dislodged from the orbit, strewn like spilled paint! Stellar write, Jude! Gravity will yank the Milky Way and Andromeda back together in their violent tango!

Sage

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

Hey Robert, always nice to read your
words.........

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

A most compelling and captivating creation, Jude. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

The uplifting current of this write is amazing! Thank you for this wonderful sharing :-)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

Ah, so deep and beautiful, this is outstanding Jude, beautifully expressed.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Anne Williams (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

"how we purge our souls of doubt"...what comes to mind is how things can be so uncertain. there's some may ways to go but where is certainty. but we know inside, we know the answers, the frame but do we have the courage to live it. wonderful, jude. ~A

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

Excellent, eloquent way of saying that we should keep our minds open so that we can learn every minute. Terriffic, Jude.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

Jude! I could hear you announcing this in my head. This piece explodes with creative and joyous energy. WOW! WOW! Do the mp3 soon. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

You describe the joy and reckless abandon of the inquisitive and perceptive mind, that is forever seeking more information and knowledge, amassing the ephemeral truths and convictions on the road of true enlightenment Jude !
Your own graphic is truly awesome
Peter

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

Wow. What an explosion of spiritual vision and cosmic assurrance. At the end of the first line, a rocket takes off, and by the end of the last, we've landed in a field of endless possibilities.

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

Jude,

What can be said that hasn't been shouted from a thousand rooftops? You keep finding better ways to say those things.

Well done sir.

Peace,

B

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

A fine-tuned expression of the ever evolving soul unafraid to face the ever expanding horizons. Splendid Jude! The graphic is perfect, psp or some other software?;-)

eT

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

Unafraid to express, undress, caress
Our choice to move onward

You make some great choices, and pen some wonderful poems, Robert.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

There is lots of hard work that goes into developing life. Without the adding of imagination and dreams and hope..one is doomed.
Excellent poetry and photo Robert.

Lisa

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

good one

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

Good wordplay concerning the ever-reaching possibilities of the written word and the honesty which go into the seriousness of the authors and scribes who are involved in this labor of love to make sense of it all. Good.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

JudeAce,

THIS. is AWESOME! I could get lost in that pic and your words...gratefully, joyfully. Beauty at its best.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.