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as if earth could pray
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as if earth could pray for itself

 

and the core of its request

resurface our heavens

and caress our stars

 

where the wounds and scars

of its present condition

scream out for reconciliation

healing and solace

 

its guts bleeding out

eroding to form anew

 

as if earth doesn’t transform

the surface of its own natural appeal

 

always upgrading to a foreign landscape

rebuilding and reforesting abandoned shores

 

as if earth’s inhabitants

would collectively pray for revival

 

hands closed now open to all

 
 
 
 
 
* photo by author

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "as if earth could pray"
Reviewed on April 6, 2014
Where was this picture taken?

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2014
How sensitive and aware. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 23, 2014
Excellentay. Strains of the Jude Of Old in this one - perhaps, as it's a rewrite, not surprising. Earth does pray - in moans and groans and birthing pangs, as we all too well know at the moment. LOVE LOVE LOVE Patrick's comment!! :) Reminds me of my Cathedral Rock poem and photo from 2009. xx

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on March 19, 2014
Great symbiotic photo and poem.

If the earth could have hemorrhoids it would be us. As a student of earth sciences it is worth noting that in the end we will be gone and the damage we've done will be corrected in ways we cannot imagine, dipshits that we are.


Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on March 19, 2014
Hey Jude,
I remember this photo, and of course your poetry is superb!
Much peace light and love,
Amber

Reviewed by J. Roseline
Reviewed on March 17, 2014
wonderful poem , great thought JK

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on March 17, 2014
~Jude~
Praying hands to the core of its request, earth's rebirth.
Beautiful healing prayer.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 17, 2014
kewl photo, does look like praying hands - the constant flow, within, without

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 17, 2014
I believe the earth will continue to evolve long after we are gone. By "gone" I would say that either we would cause our own demise or leave the planet in peace. The Earth does not pray, but it evolves according to what the sun does, and no amount of human praying will change that.

Ron

Reviewed by Clarence Prince
Reviewed on March 17, 2014
Lovely picture, the praying hands! Well Done!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 17, 2014
If only earth could pray for itself, it would probably pray to be rid of we human parasites and destroyers. I often pray for earth, but it doesn't seem to do much good.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 17, 2014
simply beautiful
budd

Reviewed by M Flack
Reviewed on March 16, 2014
The earth that God created is suffering from our greed. Maybe there's still hope. before all else fails, we can still pray.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 16, 2014
an excellent write Jude
like the picture looks like praying hands
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed on March 16, 2014
Deep and beautiful thoughts I am finding in you , my fried.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed on March 16, 2014
well stated, Jude. We should all be responding to our Earth's prayers to us,too! She gives us much and asks so little!!

Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2014
Take care of it, love and respect it and in return, it will do the same for us and more ... Beautiful picture ... it looks like praying hands ...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 16, 2014
Ditto on the photo for me, Jude. If the earth could pray for herself, what would she really ask for? Healing? Respect? To be left alone? To be cherished as one would cherish their mother? Ask us to be the caregivers of all that lives through her? Perhaps she would simply ask to be understood. You have planted a seed of thought for me, Jude. I like this poem very much. Photo shows for me now. NICE!

Reviewed on March 16, 2014
Your photo. would not show on my screen. I'm using Windows 8 Firefox as browser,

Prayers work only when humans know the value of the earth and treasure our lands. Destruction would often come when greed sets in. The reason why there are so many sink holes now on the earth's surface is because people keep drawing things out from the earth's core, leaving space within, and causing sinkholes and disfigurement to the surface.

Sandie

P.S. Thanks Jude for fixing the photo.! I can see it now. :o)


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