climbing (revised) (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 25, 2015

Life has its up and downs and we are all constantly climbing back up.

hug
Kathy

Reviewed on July 29, 2015

herein lies the heart of the game... balancing the torment of lofty ideals & willful blindness...
what a great photo, jude!

Reviewed by audrine max

Reviewed on July 28, 2015

Your words give hope during difficult circumstances.. I guess we just have to trust and keep climbing.. Thank you

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 22, 2015

Life is both a recurring ellipsis and a spiralling ellipse, that's for certain sure; the way your perilous stairway bends round on itself it a great reminder of that. But still, Led Zep-like, we keep on climbing irrespective of the detritus that stands in the way or the vicissitudes of vascilating moods in motion that pronounce us either willing or unwilling to carry on. Just goes to show that the 'not knowing' is a more powerful motivator and incentive that that which we already know or choose not to see. Nicely edited, Kartero. xx

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 19, 2015

Hey Jude
I believe this author sees all!
I loved this the first time and it's even better this time!
Extremely vivid photo😊
Peace light and love
Amber

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 19, 2015

Keep climbing Jude and keep revealing to us what you see.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 17, 2015

Bob, how did I miss this one, sorry...and about all I can say is that picture with the eroded sand dune surely does this poem explain...Peace, bro'...-e-

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 16, 2015

as always, so well said, graphic is perfect

Reviewed by E Phillips

Reviewed on July 15, 2015

After reading Sherry Heim's summation, there's little left to say.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 14, 2015

Life is like that. When we stop climbing, we're sure to fall.

Love that photograph. I was thinking last night that I hadn't seen a poem from you for a while. But here you are�

Ron

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 14, 2015

We are all climbing - one step at a time. It's the unknown that inspires us.

Sandie

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on July 13, 2015

Jude,

Life is a never ending climb. Excellent poetry.

Love and blessings,
Linda

Reviewed by ChrisTopher Stone

Reviewed on July 13, 2015

Although the unseen circumstances exist on everyone's stairway and are mostly hidden until discovered over that ridge, our willingness to continue is the center of who we are.
Love this...

Thanks
Chris

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 13, 2015

It often seems that life it one battered dream after another but giving up never feels like the right choice. Perchance beyond the next bend shall be the reveal of the life gem that we have always believed, awaits us... Love the photo and the poem, Jude.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on July 13, 2015

~Jude~
"So my willingness" plays a huge role in this poem.
Unstable is the image that conveys fortitude moving forward.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on July 13, 2015

Great photo!! Your poem is very meaningful to me. Thank you!!

Love ya.

Jane

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 13, 2015

and wow that image is perfect for this piece

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 13, 2015

We all at times love to push life to its limits