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My First Surprise
by Stan I.S Law (aka Stanislaw Kapuscinski) → (All Poetry by Stan I.S Law (aka Stanislaw Kapuscinski))
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Inspired by "EXPECTANTE". Steotite sculpture by Bozena Happach


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Sweat is still dripping. He’s nervous.
"Now breathe deeply. Don’t fear.
It takes a while for a human
to come forth from There to Here."

Could it be that out yonder,
He and I lived before?
Yet as my eyes now behold him
I don’t know what’s in store…

Surely, we’d met before.
You and I, out There, both made-up of light.
Wandering, carefree and blissful.
Out There it was our right.

And now we’re both Here. My baby and I.
Both human. Perhaps, just for a little while.
Ooops… ‘least I know that before I die,
A little angel peed . . . straight in my eye.

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 Reviews of "My First Surprise"
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
LOL! Delightful!

Reviewed on August 16, 2008

Striking, esoteric, sublime, exoteric ... "My First Surprise" glows.

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 8, 2008
Wonderful analogy!;-)It's always a pleasure to
read one who is enlightened! Thank you for sharing...

ET

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2008
Oh my,very interesting indeed...stay safe and well...Hugssssssss


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