What seekest thou endeavorer holding a candelabrum \-/ My friend seemingly besotted by a waxen stance \-/ Incandescence finds you here()a moon-lit evening \-/
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Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
all that wax, idolatrous in its own right; combined with the candles and the moon makes for a nearly erotic pressing thing./ . .. almost mystical and mythical with some ethereal BEing holding the light out for you to seek, to see[k]....and find a heart ready to be held. ..
molded among the wax figures and coral'd choiring. ..
gorgeous things really.
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Waaxen moon, I just love moon-lit evenings and sitting outside in the warm weather and watching the moon. But you presented a lovely illuminescent picture of the moon above.
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Yes,it sure does sound DREAMY wonderful writing once again dear man...stay safe and well...Hugs
Our culture has taught us to believe in many ideas which aren't actually real. Exposing these illusions allows us to recover the power to live our lives according to our deepest desires.
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molded among the wax figures and coral'd choiring. ..
gorgeous things really.
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Christine
Be always safe,
Karen
LOVE,
Susan
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"