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Since You Left Me
by Amber V Moonstone → (All Poetry by Amber V Moonstone)
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I found this in my archives, it was written one year ago, and I never posted it..I felt it was a good sequel to "Tell Me Why?" Peace, love, and light Amber "V" Moonstone


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"Since Your Left Me"

by Amber "V" Moonstone  (6/11/07)

 

Since you left me,

I have been falling apart at the seam

Nothing can mend this broken heart

It feels just like a dream.

 

Since you left me,

My life is so unreal

No one can mend this broken heart

You are all I feel.

 

Since you left me,

The clouds are so dark,

The sun can’t even mend this broken heart,

You took away my spark.

 

Since you left me,

I feel so all alone,

Love won’t mend this broken heart

I sit and wait by the telephone.

 

Since you left me,

My life is all torn upside down,

Distance can’t even mend this broken heart,

I need this to turn around.

 

Since you left me,

I have been so very blue,

Time can’t even mend this broken heart

Oh please, tell me what to do!

 

Since you left me,

I have been trying to mend this broken heart;

But, no other love has come close,

To playing your part.

 

Since you left me,

Steps are moving fast

Looking for the lightness,      

To end the darkness of the past.

 


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 Reviews of "Since You Left Me"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 17, 2008
A beautiful write Amber
of longing passionate love

Love & peace be with you
William

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 9, 2008
Perhaps, saying "since you left me" like a mantra, will mend the wounded heart and soothe the pain away.

Georg

Reviewed on July 1, 2008
Viv - WOW! the hurt was a YEAR ago, and I still feel it's sad echoe!
The flow here is felt with intensity in every line!
I hope your heart is mending! As strong as the current of the fiestiest ocean! Is that a word - Smiling - It is NOW! I know you're hurting, I can feel it - as everyday there is a new meaning - even if hiding, keep searching! or allow it to just evolve into a new splendor as you wonder...
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Gypsy Lady Sheexooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Well done and I noticed you never commented on what you feel now or was that left to our interpretation.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
I feel this emotion and pray the steps come softer and toward a more gentle time.

Allen

Reviewed on June 30, 2008
This one a c h e s with sadness, yet shines with hope - excellent, Amber.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
All the hurt and utter dispair crystallize in the beautiful piece of wonderment. How very clear and precise, yet still turning to the light for salvation....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Our trails in life sure take curves,,, we must continue on them the best we can,, You are a heart of gold!
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Shedding Light
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
I feel the emptiness and the pain. Your mood was very
well expressed in this poem.

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Very sad indeed, I know of someone whose boyfriend just sent her an email telling her it's over! What a coward, an email!!!!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
A sad poem that ends with a glimmer of hope with each new step taken! Excellent poem, Amber!...ET

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
The picture goes very well with the poem. Standing alone in a circle of what, wood or so. She is looking out at the landscape if if to see her lover running to her. Sad write, but eventually love may come to you and you will be happy and end the darkness.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Your words are so painful sweet lady,please be happy and safe thank you for caring about me ..I will miss you....Hugsssssssssssss
Love,
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
lost love is always painful my dear friend-I pray that this year true love will finally knock on the door of your heart forever-bless you-DK

Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Good Morning Amber/Viv,
My heart aches at the memories this piece brings to me. Remembering the pain that took me 2 years I think to get over....man, time is slow sometimes, and then for some there is never any resolve or closure....
emotions pour from your poem of heatache
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
VERY BEAUTIFUL, VERY ROMANTIC!!!!!!!!!!!! ANY MAN, WHO WILL READ YOUR BEAUTIFUL, MOST TALENTED POEMS, WILL DREAM ABOUT YOU!!!!!!!!!! THEY WILL LOVE YOU LIKE A QUEEN, QUEEN IN POETRY, WITH MOST BEAUTIFUL WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Excellent write, Amber; very well penned/illustrated! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Hi Amber,this is nice.Keep your head up because one day you'll find someone special who will sweep you off your feet.Continue to enjoy your life and have a smile on your face.take care dear

Edwin


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