yes, sometimes you just know, trust your intuition...

Powerful write Amber,, I can feel the thunder rumbling from within,, Excellent Job!

This sounds so familiar. Looking out the window, waiting for someone that belongs to another and they doen't come. Beautiful write.

Ed

Viv,
Love Aches & Yearns & Even Perhaps a Trespass At Times...
I Love Your Poem & Can Feel & See The Scenery
Love Inside Out Hearts Can Emotionally Sound Like A Terrible Storm.
Much The Love & The Light Of Halo's Prismatic Sphere Cast Her Beauty Of Colors
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Thunder, the sound of an angry somebody clearing his throat before sending a hurricane of words and epithet's lightnings.

Georg

Nice leitmotiv with a storm and thunder that say a lot about of the feelings in this poem. The process of realization.

Axilea

sauch an ache you express

Little Lady, sounds like you need some lovin from a man with a slow hand, who can ride you into the sunset. DJ

A very amazing photograph! Ouch, you passion, sorrow and heartache ring crystal clear, nicely done...

Be always safe,
Karen

There is passion in this loss and your cry can be heard above the thunder and the trees.
John

Whoa, Amber, that is one menacing lookin' cloud!! Looks like the kind we get around these parts in the spring! EXCELLENT write, too! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Sugar, He aint acomin back! He be a burnin his candle at both ends, and is bout to get his butt hairs singed! SC

Your words left me speechless
I shall stand here steadfast,
reveling in the rolling thunderous night,
forsaking your lover's bite!
Such beautiful longing and imagery
Your rhyme is absolutely beautiful
Stunning poetic view of thoughts
I can just imagine this poem combine with the song
And the thunder rolls
Peace Love and Light…and hugsss….Yolie

You belong to another, reality is quite clear
Tonight you will not be here, why because he cannot find an excuse tonight. The thunder is brewing in the heart. A fantastic write Amber. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Your soul cries out in this piece of work Amber !!

Harold M. Nash

Reality, dear Amber, is a fenced in world for those who
lack your imagination. -gene.

I have enjoyed the reading of "Thunderous Exiting".

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Hi Amber,your poem was absolutely amazing.Just like thunder and lightening,it struck me with amazement.I really enjoy reading this poem.take care

Edwin

I must say you have left me thunder struck
with this awesome write
You express your feelings from the depths
of you wanting heart.
Peace & love Be with you

William

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh this is GORGEOUS, Amber. Wow. Storm and emotion are one in this one - excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

WOW! I'm writing a Thunder storm Poem myself Sweetie, not on these lines, but this floors me, I had to check the date it was written! I feel such yearning and sadness and wanting more and knowing in your heart of hearts, it just won't be or at least NOT right now, unless if it's meant to be!
I love this poem, and the pict. is deeply inspiring!
A favorite of mine of yours! again...
STay Smiling!
STay Positive!, the Ocean is calling YOU! Run, don't walk! ;)
WRITE ON! If that is the inspiration that is calling... Listen close, as your pen you repose!
Warmest of Love, Light and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo
Namaste!
P.S. My moods were dark and lonely for 2 days, I finally feel like I am pulling out of it!Maybe you were feeling this energy! Let us combine our forces and strike OUT/BAck in a more stronger more meaningful way! Ahhhhhhh

Very nice and very sad!!!!!!!!!! Just remember, that YOU are AMBER MOONSTONE, one of the most TALENTED POETS and you are beautiful lady and many men will dream about YOU!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva