I Believe (Senryu) (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 13, 2008

I love the message in this, perfectly worded
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Good wording...Great message...Perfect Senryu!! KUDOS, Bernice
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke

Reviewed on May 31, 2008

SPOT ON!! Brilliant! :)) Possibilities are around us, waiting to happen ALLLLL the time... but when they come together in "coincidence", then WHAM! Possibilities become probabilities that go on to become hard fact. Excellent, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2008

Beautiful words of hope as life is full of possibilities if only we open our eyes and do not let them pass us by. Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on May 30, 2008

excellent work...beautiful senryu Bernice.
John

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on May 30, 2008

Fantastic use of senryu!
I love the message of the verse...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2008

Oh my,Excellent just excellent sweet lady...have a wonderful and safe day OK...Hugss

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on May 30, 2008

WHOA!!!
This Is An Awsome Message!!
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 30, 2008

A senryu going on and on and on, multiplying itself in the mind like a fractal composition.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Ah! You've spoken to my heart with this! Excellent writing, Bernice.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Bravo. Short and powerful. Liz

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Got to agree with felix here, thank you Bernice.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Wise beyound your years, most of us take almost a lifetime to discover this. Nice one Bernice.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Perfection! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Perfect Ku

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Hrad to fit long English words into a senryu but you did it. I'm having trouble with tankas for the same reason. Need to break out into something with more room. :)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Sounds like something Og Mandino might say...thanks for the advice...Ed

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Wow! Splendid Senryu, Bernice!Creative wording!ET

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

This one made me think, Bernice; I read it several times. Good stuff! Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

ew nac llac ti taht ro ew nac llac ti esoppus ot neppah, great 5-7-5,
ees I t'nac esrever 5-7-5, :-) sguh