The Present (Senryu) (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

Wise are those that unwrap the presents offered by our Heavenly Father and not those the world offers. Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Love those wodds of poetic wisdom
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Awesome Bernice. Talent galore. Bravo. Liz

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

I have unwrapped mine and enjoy it daily, the most precious gifts I have ever received. Life what more can we ask for. Thank you for sharing Bernice.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Exactly - the action lies within us. We would not sit waiting for a gift to unwrap itself, nor should we idly sit back and wait for life to unfold. Great message that speaks of your strong character.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

.... and there are so many to unwrap,,, great job!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Delightful brevity - good message!
Richard

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Wonderful senryu, Bernice!

Reviewed by Shedding Light

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

Much truth is here.

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

Your senryus always ring of truth...
Cryssa

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

thanks, I've unwrapped, then zapped, also night capped, got slapped, then again trapped, but life is an adventure worth it all. I'm still waiting on my present, it seems I paid the price, for the slice, let me be nice, so I'll freeze like ice, great senyru reminder B, hugs:-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

Beautifuly perceptive, Bernice! You do these so well!...ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

Oh how very true and to explore is the best part of all...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

Yes it is!! and not a gift to be saved for a rainy day
or a special occassion & I am so glad to have recieved the lovely present & gift of your friendship!
Love & Hugszzz :)
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

So true, so true...

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

Bernice, you're so right!! Each of us hold the key to our lives and we can make it good or bad...I'm glad I had enough sense to make it good. A really good write.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

Bernice,

Great, All in one neat little package. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

...any day I wake up breathing is a gift from God. :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn (obviously breathing...LOL). :D

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

Sure is a present from God and he's waiting for anyone to find him in the exploring.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

...and hear from everybody SURPRISE ! ! ! because it is full of wonderful things or is...empty!
An excellent senryu

Georg

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

Beautifully said . . . Nothing else need be added . . . Great senryu . . .

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

P E R F E C T gift to receive this morning - your words! Well done, Bernice -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

And it's not even my birthday - that's n e x t week! LOL