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Resentment (senryu)
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Bottled inside that
smile are nightmares waiting to
taste the dawn of day

 

Copyright © 2008 Bernice Angoh

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Resentment (senryu)"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on November 21, 2008
Don't let them out. Or just let them go. I don't know. But your words struck a cord of recognition here. Excellent write. Liz

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on November 21, 2008
been there.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2008
Sad to think what's really behind many a smile...excellent, Holly

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
The facade of a smile...excellent and powerful write, bernice!

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
great write, resentment held in turns wild. Better to tell them off right at the time. LOL

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
That smile hiding the resentment within ....

nice work Bernice...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Bernice,
Great power in these well-chosen, pithy words.
John

Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Amazing and yes powerful. If we could only remember when we do this to turn our inside to mirror that smile.

love ya,
ann

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Ah, what then lurks behind the smile of one so deep.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
You pack a punch in those few words. OUCH! May I never harbor such feelings again! --Charlie

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
An excellent piece Bernise
so much said in a few words
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Wonderful writing sweet lady...have a great and safe night...Hugss

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Bernice this is not only a brilliant Senyru it is such a deep, intense statement that applies to so many of us. Especially we poets, most of us are a smiling hopeful personalities but when we let our pens have their freedoms...our monsters are often unleashed. Well done,
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
I've seen that smile somewhere before...hee, hee...
This could also be a senryu about passive aggressivenes...:~)

Cryssa

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
A smile can be nice
Can take you to paradise
On the way to hell

Reviewed on November 20, 2008
This one is haunting ... and very well penned, Bernice; well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Yes! WOW! Bernice, probably one of the most philosophical statement that I have had the pleasure of read and review. Yes! WOW!

Georg


Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
A happy thought, Bernice, embraced in just a few loving words. -gene.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
So much is said within such few words. thank you for sharing bernice.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
WOW, that's all I can say...great write, Love, Bonnie


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