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hallows and hollowed
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it is an annual tradition for me to carve pumpkins on Oct 29th, by birthday, and my 50th this year! So... for LaBelle's Poetry Ball...may the spirit of my carving be left in her party garden....


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hallows and hollows shroud and cloak
yet in just one note you’d have me shriek
you obviously care not for mild nor meek
knowing of course, I’m neither of these
 
for born within me is a lethal  weapon
kept on its guard behind locked bars
I’ve seen it slice, severe its razor
and it has carved before 
 
fueled by desires, I zone the victim
strong urges will lead me into
bumpy situations
cornered and motivated
I can retreat or attack 
 
so I suggest you take a step back
 
while I polish and sharpen
my carving knives
squinting until I see the
gleam of your eyes
 
I hollow the insides
right down to the core
scrape out the guts
then drill on the orange
 
surgical precision
each delicate cut
I’m gentle you see
it doesn’t hurt much
 
scraps on the compost
feeding the birds
candles on the inside
warming the innards
 
hallowed it be this piece of art
is it cruel?… to slice and dart?
pulling the hood up from my cape
it’s a shriek to the night
and a quick escape


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 Reviews of "hallows and hollowed"
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
Fantastic artistry carving pumpkins as you do. Thanks for sharing this offering and hope you have a very Happy Birthday too....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
A wonderful write...great photo, and a happy birthday wish to you! Well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
My little young chicken, you weren't hatched yet, or about, when I got discharged from Korea.
I hope that those odd fifty years were good to you, because I wish they have been, if not, you have fifty more to catch up!!!!!!
Congratulations!!! Happy Birthday, I will help you to blow that lot of candles when you hit one hundred, Ha Ha! Ha!! Ha!!! Haaaaaaaaa!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
wow--a beautiful work of art-both poem and pumpkin!

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
"...hallowed it be this piece of art!"
thats you speaking, Debby...Happy 50th Birthday and Happy Halloween!
Great Masterpiece all around!
I must try and get my Fall decorations out! I'm "Fall-ing" behind!
LOL!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
WOW! Debby this is nothing short of spectacular! I mean the poem and the pumpkin, what a treat this is. I love the carving.I have to try that! Also, Happy Birthday and may you have many more after the next 50;-)Blessings to you!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
Happy carving...and even more, happy number 50,

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
Very lovely poem for the season of spirits and by the way big happy birthday wishes and hugs too.

Fee

Reviewed on October 26, 2007
Debby this is a wonderful addition to the ball, happy bday Sweet Lady.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
The happiest of birthday's to you.

It's a good thing you forewarned me that this is a pumpkin, else I might not have gone to Belle's ball. Whew!

Kathy

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
If that's one of your carvings - the headless horseman - it's superb. What a talent! And Happy Birthday. 50 is a great transition. The old age of youth and the youth of old age. Cute poem Mrs. Rosenberg.
Blessings ...
Richard


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