Oh yeah, Sandie, you spoke much truth within these lines. True enough, she might have suddendly became shy, even so, she immediately knew she wanted to wear Cindy’s glass slippers forever, even though she realized it was the glass slippers was the reason she suddenly became shy. But something within her told her she was proud she could affect men in that fashion . . . And so it goes . . .
I can see her. A young girl emerging from her shell only to be frightened and scurries back home.
Reviewed by May Yu (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2018
Beautiful poem and very strong visual imagery! I really enjoyed this one.
The young girl is pretty with the little red dress. Of course, she's going to show off. Say goodbye to running shoes! In with the sandals and the heels!
What a lovely bouncy little poem , Sandie dear. Hope all is well, Thanks for sharing,
Reviewed by Danny Underwood (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2018
You made me think of a female cartoon character with long wavy hair combed to cover one side of her face, walking down the street swaying her hips. Great visual effects with this poem! The girl in the photo can be a tease too depending on how she walks.
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Gavin
I have some lovely granddaughters
and had that great privilege of watching them grow
Love & Peace be with you
William
Regis
I will only say this about Ms. Cindy: Yes!
The young girl is pretty with the little red dress. Of course, she's going to show off. Say goodbye to running shoes! In with the sandals and the heels!
May
Sandie :)
Ron
Love ya!
Jane
Dan