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Dad's Lunch Box
by Mary E Lacey Desertrat → (All Poetry by Mary E Lacey Desertrat)
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look for the beauty in everything, sometimes it's well hidden


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Alone atop an old ‘frig, sat
a mangled lunch box made of tin.
Something no one would ever touch
But I knew it’s secret meaning and loved
it ever so much.
I picked up the lunch box and I began
to cry. For it belonged to my father
who had recently died.
A blue collared working man, of that he
was proud.   No, he didn’t make a lot
of money, but loved his family, he let
no put he or his family down.
For thirty years, he carried that ugly box
And though it was falling apart, to replace it,
He never gave a thought. It was more to him
than just some beat up old box.  Long ago, a friend
had given him a new shiny box to celebrate his finding a
job.  His friend was very ill, and before he passed
away, he smiled and said,  "write your name
on the bottom and remember me at lunch everyday."
When my Dad finally retired, his friends gave
him a party, and said, “Herb, we’re going to
miss you. They laughed, “But now that you’re going
to retire; shouldn’t you retire that hunk of tin too?”
I took the box off the ‘frig and put it away, and though
it’s ugly and worn, it holds priceless memories. And the
water works began again, when on the bottom of the
box scribbled though it was blurred,
                                      “This box is the property of Herb”
 
Mary E. Lacey
2009


 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Dad's Lunch Box"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 3, 2010
You bring back memories of my father's tin lunch box, Mary; in your case (your dad's) this lunch box is very symolic and hold a lot of meaning. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Joanna Leone
Reviewed on May 8, 2009
My father was a skilled laborer. His workboots, lunch bag, sweatshirt and the cement bag in his truck are images of my father.
I think this is a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your father. It is not just an ordinary lunch box, but a symbol of your father which is packed with memories and love

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on March 28, 2009
Beautifully written Mary. It captures the essence of your dad.........M

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 23, 2009
Jerks a tear from my eye.

Ron

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on March 16, 2009
an emotional recall of the symbols of our lives -- the tools of day to day living that give us cause to pause, and reflect on their significance in our lives -- your dad obviously loved the lunch box because it reminded him of his friend just as it reminds you of your dad -- the is a lovely story Mary, and a fine tribute to your dad -- I know he appreciates it, and loves you -- peace and love to you -- Jon Michael

Reviewed on March 16, 2009
great reflective verse mary

Reviewed by Swan Son
Reviewed on March 15, 2009
Mary -- you did it again -- you tell a great story ... plus making it a tribute to your Dad. Back at the time he received this treasure from his friend, a job was hard to come by. It was a treasure in and of itself -- a way to work hard and support your family. A man's worth is not in the dollars he earned ... but in the pride he took in his work and the love he gave to his family. By using that tin box so long, he also gave a wonderful tribute to his dear friend. Thanks for sharing. Susan

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on March 15, 2009
What a very touching poem. Actually made me almost cry. Very touching. That is wat a good writer does. And you have such a gift. Thank you Mary.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 15, 2009
Honoring thy father, remembering his tender smile and soft voice when telling you stories, being the strong oak protecting your life, yes, you have honored well with this poem.

Georg


Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 15, 2009
such a wonderful write...that tin box travled many a miles with him...holding much purpose too....carrying his food.
Beautiful expressions of memories we keep!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on March 14, 2009
Mary:

This one expresses so well of your love and longings for your father. I know the feeling so well. After my dad passed away, I was wearing his sweater and his jackets with me to work. I didn't even care if I looked odd to others. It was because I didn't really want to part with what was once belonged to him.

You have expressed these feelings so well in this poem. I applaud this!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 14, 2009
A good write that is a true tribute to not only your father but to all the working men out there who spend each day making the things this country needs...

Fee

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on March 14, 2009
So beautiful and touching Mary and the beautiful cherished memories of a beloved Herb. He will be with you for ever in your heart and cherished box...love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on March 14, 2009
Oh Mary... what a lovely writing... and I love the last line... Tells volumes of such a cherished man! hugs, lindalaw


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