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MEN ! ! ! !
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This Photography Artist Is One Of My VERY VERY Favorites!!
This Particular Photo Obviously Has A Symbolic Freudian Message for Men & Women :)


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PHOTOGRAPHY ARTIST: http://muse1979.deviantart.com

 

Men
 
Masculinity rules the essence of a man
when he walks past her bare shoulders;
 as the silent wanting thief
entering into the privacy of her yearning.
She can feel the strength
of her passions burning to be quenched;
ignited by flames
of ardent needs to be fulfilled
within desirous urgencies…
Her primordial desires
envelop within her ravaging senses;
Seduced within her prowl of forbidden thoughts
as she will soon become the aggressor.
Devouring his brawn measures
within the intensity of his masculine presence;
her lips become an explodent fuse
into the heart of her erotic surrender….
 
 
(Written: April 11th, 2008 8:48 a/m)
 
Copyright © 2008 Vickie L. McColley
In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love
poétesse d ‘ amour ~ poétesse romantique
Embraced ~ Embrassé

 


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 Reviews of "MEN ! ! ! !"
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2009
I think to have a gifted Poetess as pretty as you being the aggressor
any man would gladly become your lover-as for me I have often felt that true beauty is not in the face or the body but in the intelligence and imagination of a woman-you my dearest Victoria have all of them

Reviewed by Robby Baby Poet of Amour (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2008
OH MY! LOL Would I get in trouble if I quoted this poem when I walked by a lady and said this is what she was thinking? LOL KIDDING!! A delighful romp through a womans mindscape for sure. You are always so honest, one of the qualities I admire most in you :)

A very delightful piece!

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2008
Ha! I remember, as a young man, it came as a shock to find out that girls like guys! Big epiphany, there. Sheltered life, I guess. Sadie Hawkins strikes again! Giggle This is a really cool poem. Enjoyed it very much. Write on!

Ted

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on April 13, 2008
"Vickie" an honest piece written from the heart. I wrote a MEN poem but it was lighthearted and funny. this one my dear, is quite sensual and evokes primal thoughts.. thank you I needed this today!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
...Wow, look at them big b***s, wonder if they are real or not...;) ed (sorry, just being a normal, relatively, man)

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
From a woman's perspective, they call it passion. When women relate the man's perspective, they call it lust. Why is this? Great photo to relate. Great poem to relate. Thanks, Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
well i do understand your thoughts with this write and also the hidden meaning of your picture. ah so true do your words eclipse the droll of men, yet the sensuality of those who brush past you and feel the aura of your passion and then cast that quick, subtle glimpse to find their reflection in your eyes garners flushed heated promises of love to come once again.

always,
randy

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 11, 2008
YES!!!!They are yummy, those oh, don't get me started V. I LOVE this, very erotic and heated piece..hmmm this line I love the most "...My primordial desires

envelop within my ravaging senses;

clawed in a prowl of forbidden thoughts

as I become the aggressor." We do become the aggressors don't we....lol


Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on April 11, 2008
Wow Love the Symbolic picture
And the honest thoughts in this poem
I believe that is in our nature man and woman
Do look at each other
Well that's just my opinion
And I love the words you chose to
show the beauty of this poem!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning star

Reviewed on April 11, 2008
WOW!!!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 11, 2008
I love the picture and the poem> I truly believe that men and women look at each other and admire or not admire depending on their tastes. I do believe because of upbringing, at least women of my generation, are afraid to say how they really feel. So I enjoyed this honest open write. Well done Vick
Hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2008
And I wonder why I find myself in so much trouble! he he he.....men there's nothing on earth more alluring or tantalyzing. I could feast my life away.........Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed on April 11, 2008
I like men too LOL!! Very sensual and visual.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 11, 2008
When it come to girls, men are all eyes and with blood going south emptying their brain.

Georg

Reviewed on April 11, 2008
Vickie,

MEN!!!! Can't live with 'em, can't live without 'em. Thank God for the ones we can live with - this is beautiful, stimulating verse, and that photo is GORGEOUS. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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