Would We - Could We - Change What Is? (poem) by Jackie (Micke) Jinks on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 17, 2006

Another beautiful write. Thanks for this
Hugs Angela

Reviewed on November 17, 2006

I love to write about dreams and fantasy. I hope you'll check out my "Dreamland" and others..

Reviewed on November 12, 2006

This is certainly worthy of pause for thought and "food" for reflection, Jackie. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on November 11, 2006

It's want we dreamt about that may lead us to further reflection, but I prefer to forget the past and think of today. Today is a new fresh day. What can I do today that I did not do in the past? Obviously we cannot change the world. That is too great a burden for us and it is in safe hands, those of God. Think of today, Micke, not even of tomorow, for if we live well today, tomorrow will take care of itself. Victor

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on November 11, 2006

Ahhh Self reflection and we all are quite guilty of it.
Great Write Micke~
You prevoked many mindful thoughts here, or shall I say in dreams we will begin!
WArm HuGs,Sheee

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on November 11, 2006

I believe we did dream and ponder and as life grows longer we ponder more and hope to dream... A wonderful poem............

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 11, 2006

Very evocative poem Micke! Wow, you are getting deep my friend;-)
Much to ponder!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 11, 2006

Could we have altered our lives
and that of others
had we been more aware of ourselves
and those around us?

Quite profound questions, Micke, and much food for thought.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on November 11, 2006

An excellent write that should provoke much thought. I've had many regrets in my life but I've since changed my perspective and realise that even those mistakes I made were valuable lessons. I no longer live in the past but I use those lessons in my present and look forward to a future filled with promise.
Thanks for sharing
Chanti

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on November 11, 2006

Expressed very well Micke. We have all spent quiet time and reflected on the past and wondered.
Rusty

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 11, 2006

Hind sight is a great thing, but at the wrong time..

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 11, 2006

Outstanding write ....Micke
Just like a poet
dreaming searching for inspiration
Its always there, one seek and one will find

Peace & Love
William

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on November 11, 2006

Excellent self-reflection, Micke. I've wondered at times the very same things, but you've put it all into words so perfectly. Very nice.
Love,
CJ